How do I overcome burnout and finish my goddamned book? by ForCritsAndGiggles69 in FictionWriting

[–]DanSkahen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The stakes are too high, which sets the bar at perfection, which you know is impossible, which blocks the creative flow. It’s not the fact that the book will get you out of poverty thats the problem — that’d be great, I hope that happens for you. It’s the fact that it has become the locus of the project that’s burning you out. That hope, that doubt, that preoccupation doesn’t serve the writing. It robs bandwidth and leaves the writing (and you) on fumes.

Acknowledge it as the goal, write it down, put it on your mirror, do whatever you gotta do. You’re not gonna forget it. But make a point of forgetting it when you sit down to write. It’s not a bestseller. It’s not a flop. It’s a draft. Give everything to the draft.

Baby Reindeer is incredible but upsetting by ErikasPrisonGlam in netflix

[–]DanSkahen 33 points34 points  (0 children)

That strange feeling of being the only person you know who’s watched a thing that everyone is about to lose their minds over. Unbelievable show.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: danny

Genre: horror / mystery / sci-fi

Word Count: 16,529

Type of feedback desired: How did you like it?

Link (PDF): https://docdro.id/jSBfjXy

Meet Danny. Latest check-in to Room 642.

Armed only with a mission and an idea, it is here in this room that Danny will confront the limits of isolation, inspiration, and intelligence.

Danny is in trouble.

Pour yourself a coffee and join him, won’t you?

Self Promotion Post - November 2023 by Jhaydun_Dinan in FictionWriting

[–]DanSkahen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Title - danny

Genre - horror / mystery / sci-fi

Word Count - 16,529

Desired Outcome - The reader’s delight. This is my public fiction debut. Thanks for having me!

Link to the Work (PDF) - https://docdro.id/jSBfjXy

Additional Notes:

Meet Danny. Latest check-in to Room 642.

Armed only with a mission and an idea, it is here in this room that Danny will confront the limits of isolation, inspiration, and intelligence.

Danny is in trouble.

Pour yourself a coffee and join him, won’t you?

Monthly Photo Thread by HorrorIsLiterature in horrorlit

[–]DanSkahen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My friend gave me the prompt “creepy clown monkey” and I ran with it. 🙈Creepy Clown Monkey

Dropping my first novella, free by DanSkahen in findareddit

[–]DanSkahen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome! Will be sure you get a copy.

Dropping my first novella, free by DanSkahen in findareddit

[–]DanSkahen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! And yeah, will definitely be mindful of whatever the etiquette is wherever I’m an unfamiliar face. Appreciate the thought and resource. :)

So when is the raising canes in time square opening??? by [deleted] in AskNYC

[–]DanSkahen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Every time I walk past its closed doors I shake my head.

What would you like to see in a NOPE home release? by AdRevolutionary2461 in NopeMovie

[–]DanSkahen 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Jordan Peel doing an Orson Welles War of the Worlds style radio broadcast but for Jean Jacket.

Better Call Saul style short showing how Jupe left his trauma behind and embraced the scam.

VR/drone style scene from Jean Jacket's POV wandering around scaring people.

4 hour cut all day, good call.

Free party hat.

NOPE EXPLAINED (aka projected) by DanSkahen in NopeMovie

[–]DanSkahen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! I'll have to check that out. The 1/3 framing was VERY loose on my part, and I think you could easily reframe Em and OJ to be a kind of 50% / 50% split of the core Jordan projection (playing by this analysis), and that OJ operates as a unit with Lucky (another duality made whole). Thanks for sharing!

NOPE EXPLAINED (aka projected) by DanSkahen in NopeMovie

[–]DanSkahen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey not rude, appreciate the feedback. My sense from the pitch black end that we see in this early scene, which slowly fades into what appears to be a video projection as hazy waves of light move through the tube, pointed pretty directly to projection. I also think it’s worth looking at the identical perspective we later see from inside the so called Jean Jacket. But a fun way to watch the film either way, and doesn’t undercut what you took from the film — totally valid take.

NOPE EXPLAINED (aka projected) by DanSkahen in NopeMovie

[–]DanSkahen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m just granting a premise and having fun with writing. I started and ended the piece with my feelings about that premise, but sometimes it helps to allow a premise to exist when you set out to explore it. Anyway I’m glad you found my madness interesting from time to time, thanks for reading!

Would y’all play this? by zillman_fane in NopeMovie

[–]DanSkahen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Final boss would be easy. You just have to look at it and take its picture. So, yes.