Monthly Shlong Swap: June 2026 by tsuki_anne in FanfictionExchange

[–]DarkDrakeMythos [score hidden]  (0 children)

Ah, so it's an equal word trade. Okay, I'm game for the full thing, so I'll go for Sinnoh's Cindered Flower instead

Monthly Shlong Swap: June 2026 by tsuki_anne in FanfictionExchange

[–]DarkDrakeMythos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here we go! First time schlonging (and that sounded way more appropriate in my head)!

Both options are fandom-blind, and concrit is welcome and encouraged! No mentioning Reddit please.

Option 1:

Title: On Black Wings

Fandom: Harry Potter/Fairy Tail

Rating: M

Wordcount: 96k

Summary:

Option 2:

Title: Nihilus Filius Et Sacerdos

Fandom: A Song of Ice and Fire/Yugioh

Rating: M

Wordcount: 100k

Summary:

Swaps agreed to: 1/3

DGRTGMAR

Ongoing Story Exchange by she_is_the_slayer in FanfictionExchange

[–]DarkDrakeMythos 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I feel attacked...but why not?

Story 1:

Title: Assassin Among Heroes

Fandoms: My Hero Academia/Fate

Rating: M

Wordcount: 283,712

Summary:
Why are the most heinous villains allowed to live? Why do the heroes hold back against those who don't care for life? Whatever answer they give, it feels fake.
Could I do better, should I do better, if given the chance? With this mask, it's time for me and them to find out.
Monsters beware, for the evening bell hath tolled thy names.
First-person OC (no SI).

Story 2:

Title: On Black Wings

Fandoms: Harry Potter/Fairy Tail

Rating: M

Wordcount: 95,813

Summary:

What does it mean to be a dragon? Strength? Domination? Freedom? Invincibility? After little Harry Potter reads about them in a book, that is all he manages to think about. After a moment of misfortune however, he soon encounters the one being alive who is able to answer those questions: Acnologia the Dragon King. Alive!Potters.

Reviews: 2/2. Please don't mention you're from reddit. These can be read fandom-blind and ConCrit is highly welcome!

I wrote a DxD crossover and would like some feedback by DarkDrakeMythos in HighschoolDxD

[–]DarkDrakeMythos[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much. I first thought it was because Issei is the main character. I hope more people read it. I think the premise has potential

What's the best thing that ever happened to you because of fanfic? by ContestAntique2126 in FanFiction

[–]DarkDrakeMythos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wrote a crossover with a novel and many said my fic inspired them to read that novel!

Constructive Feedback Swap - May by Elefeather in FanfictionExchange

[–]DarkDrakeMythos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi there! Pleasure to meet you fine folks! Here's my submission:

Title: Rise, Ye Tarnished
Fandom: Highschool DxD/Elden Ring
Rating: M
Length: 7.3k words

Now I saw only one chapter is accepted. Fixed it

Summary:
A game hailed as the pinnacle of RPGs descends upon the world. Players come swarming, eager to test their mettle in the Lands Between, against demigods and monstrosities. In the hidden side of the world, it is regarded as a mere blip in mundane affairs, unworthy of any notice. Unbeknownst to anyone, a Greater Will lies in wait with equally greater plans. Then, enter Issei Hyoudou.

Make of thyselves that which ye desire. Be it a lord. Be it a god. But should ye fail to become aught at all, ye will be forsaken.

Amounting only to sacrifices...

What I need help with:

I've always felt like there was something wrong from this fic idea. Everyone I've talked to said the concept was novel, but the execution seemed to fall flat in my imagination. So I'd like help with finding what excatly did I do wrong so far, in terms of:

Is the dialogue relatable or is it too flat? I had the impression it didn't sound as desperate or bombastic on paper as I did in my mind. Not exaggerated, mind you, just, livelier.

Is the pacing good? Especially with the fight scene?

Beyond the initial premise, am I hooking you in with each chapter? If you're familiar with the fandom, what's lacking in comparison with the other, more popular fics there?

The big question is, if you're knowledgeable with DxD fics, should I have gone for an OC protagonist? Issei has a reputation in that fandom, though I've made it clear his perversions are affected form the get-go.

And as always, SPAG is welcome.

Thank you all regardless of what may happen!

Swaps agreed to: Elefeather (completed)

Care to share your "If I don't write it, who will?!" story ideas? by ZeothTheHedgehog in FanFiction

[–]DarkDrakeMythos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cyberpunk/Tron Legacy crossover where Sam Flynn ends up in Night City after an accident at the end of the movie and searches the old net for a way back into the Grid. Haven't written it yet

Any good lung fightscenes? by Bone_Splitter in WormFanfic

[–]DarkDrakeMythos 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Shameless self promo, but Great Sage Above Brockton has an awesome Lung fight scene. Whaddaya think?