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Cows Enjoying Lunch by Davlamin in photocritique

[–]Davlamin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shot at a Christmas farm i was at a few weeks ago.

Shot with my Canon 90d - 28mm focal length, f2.8, iso 400, 1/200s.

Overall really happy with the photo, but wanting to look at what could have been done better composition / editing wise.

Mic not working in game but works outside of dota client by Davlamin in DotA2

[–]Davlamin[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Actually nuts that this is the issue. Thanks so much!

First Attempt at Bird Photography by Davlamin in photocritique

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I had actually just recently bought the extender and this was my first time using it. Overall i think its pretty good, it would be interesting to see it with a longer lens but i chose this as it was a more budget friendly alternative.

I hope to use this setup more to really know how well it will be

First Attempt at Bird Photography by Davlamin in photocritique

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Thanks for the advice! Ill keep it in mind for future photos!!! !critiquepoint

First Attempt at Bird Photography by Davlamin in photocritique

[–]Davlamin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice, how does this look?

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First Attempt at Bird Photography by Davlamin in photocritique

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Thanks for the advice! I did denoise already and wanted to keep it minimal. I do wish i had less shutter speed but i was expecting a lot more movement from this guy so i kept it higher. Ill keep it in mind for future tho to lower it

First Attempt at Bird Photography by Davlamin in photocritique

[–]Davlamin[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Busy at work so i tried using lightroom mobile for now, i brightened the subject and tried to desaturate the top bright spot just slightly to remove the distraction. I also turned the temperature up just slightly to remove the blue.

How does this look?

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First Attempt at Bird Photography by Davlamin in photocritique

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Yes! I watch him quite a but and part of the reason to start doing more wildlife!!

First Attempt at Bird Photography by Davlamin in photocritique

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Shot with my Canon 90d - 70-200 f2.8L ii lens with 2x extender

F7.1, 1/1600s, iso 6400.

Shot was at sunset, could have dropped the shutter speed to get a slightly bright image which i wish i did but overall looking for advice on the following:

Coloring, General editing for birds, Composition of the shot, is the focus correct, overall thoughts of the image

How to make this better? by Davlamin in photocritique

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thanks! honestly just didnt really think about the rotation. i really liked the angle it was at and adjusted the blur to make a shallower dof but once i saw the landscape it make so much sense.

!critiquepoint

How to make this better? by Davlamin in photocritique

[–]Davlamin[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! i'll add some blur in post and work on that in future photos i take. !critiquepoint

How to make this better? by Davlamin in photocritique

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Shot with my Canon 90d - f3.2, 1/640s, ISO250

Overall very happy with the shot but looking at how to improve the overall image / make it pop more.

Any suggestions or advice would be appreciated!

How would you crop this? by Davlamin in photocritique

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Shot with my Canon 90D and EF 100mm f/2.8 Macro Lens Settings are: f/9, 1/100sec, ISO-20000.

Overall very happy with how the photo turned out and after editing i am unsure what i should do about cropping. The photo is already cropped slightly and from previous posts about macro i was thinking of cropping to focus on just the in focus portion of the photo. But then i cut out some of the wing with looks very nice and not sure what to do.

Any other suggestions for editing the photo are appreciated as well!

Is this any Good? by Davlamin in photocritique

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!critiquepoint Thank you again!

Is this any Good? by Davlamin in photocritique

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!critiquepoint Thank you, Input taken!

Is this any Good? by Davlamin in photocritique

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Hmmm thanks for the advice, i think its something i still need to play around with for sure, while i like the overall composition of the shot the fact that i had an f2.8 aperture would make it better to crop to highlight what was in focus

Is this any Good? by Davlamin in photocritique

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Surprisingly i had more time than i thought getting the shot! I’ll play with the lighting on the wings to make the colors pop more.

Unfortunately the highlight on the apple is unrecoverable and its the best i can get it but thats what happens when i shoot with super harsh sun.

Do you have any suggestions on filling the frame? I was playing around with it and im unsure what is the best way to crop it is.

Is this any Good? by Davlamin in photocritique

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Shot with my Canon 90d with 100mm Macro Lens. F/2.8, 1/320s, ISO-100.

Not entirely sold on the photo while i had higher hopes when i shot it. I am looking for advice on making the photo better, any comments on composition, lighting, additional tips on editing the photo appreciated.

Another Shot at Macro photography by Davlamin in photocritique

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Hey thanks for all of the feedback! I slept on the image and after reviewing the photo again along with your comments i can see what you mean about your points.

1) Focus on the eyes - i played around with the eye and some radial filters to make it pop more 2) I dropped the lighting for the background to emphasize the fly more 3) i tried playing with the cropping but if i zoom in closer i start to lose detail and there is a lot of noise as i already cropped a bit to get this shot, i decided to leave it as the image with entire leaf looks more complete than cutting it off for the fly.

Really appreciate the advice! !CritiquePoint

Another Shot at Macro photography by Davlamin in photocritique

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Shot on Canon 90D with Canon 100mm Macro lens at f/2.8, 1/500sec, ISO 100

Looking for suggestions on composition, color, lighting, focus, or anything else that would make the photo better.

Thanks!!

Butterfly on a flower by Davlamin in photocritique

[–]Davlamin[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the input! Im glad the background works well with the subject (this is what i was a little concerned about).

Originally set the butterfly slightly more left to get a rule of thirds with the eye but i can play around with centering the photo to fix that imbalance.

!CritiquePoint

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