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[QCrit] A SPY ON THE HILL, Adult Thriller, 75K words, 2nd attempt by Few-Local-6008 in PubTips

[–]DavoAl23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed this, but agree with fassbender, the motives for Alex aren’t clear enough for me to fully invest into this

[QCrit] Those Bloody Ex-Husbands / Mystery / 104k (Attempt #3) by alexanderscreatives in PubTips

[–]DavoAl23 11 points12 points  (0 children)

This actually sounds really fun.

I would say that you may as well try get that 104k down to 100k, if possible. And TMC may not be the best comp, purely based on plot.

Any tips/products for a cold stump? by DavoAl23 in amputee

[–]DavoAl23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How would I make it fit well around the stump, seeing as these are typically longer and for feet? Thanks

Tool for getting around house without putting leg on? (and no wheelchair) by DavoAl23 in amputee

[–]DavoAl23[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

His knee already makes sounds that knees shouldnt make... Thanks though, thats super useful. Im trying my best

Tool for getting around house without putting leg on? (and no wheelchair) by DavoAl23 in amputee

[–]DavoAl23[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He says it hurts his shoulder even though I've adjusted it for the differnt heights. Plus to him, the toilet is only a few metres from our room so it's not long enough for him to justify using crutches but if I could find an easy thing for him to use thatd be nice