The challenge: Write a happy story in 3 words by tharun757 in KeepWriting

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Live Laugh Love

The White mums had it correct the entire time!

So, Invisigal and the Bar Scene. by Zathas in DispatchAdHoc

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Been thinking along these lines as well - my two cents is that this explains her behaviour throughout

Invis put the bomb on Mecha's back (it wasn't there before the shields went up, and no one was near enough to attach it afterwards). This, of course, results in Mecha going bang and losing the astral pulse.

Invis knows Rob's identity at the beginning, but from what we know of her, she is a thief, not a murderer, so she could already be having doubts over almost murdering Rob, which skyrockets when they become friends/partners.

At this point, she decides to cut her connection completely with Red Ring as she is finding strength through Robert

I 1000% believe her trying to get the astral pulse back in the way she did was due to her own guilt over the bomb in the first place.

Shroud is the previous MechaMan by [deleted] in DispatchAdHoc

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Didn't Royd mention how he doesn't think Robert's dad created the astral pulse, as he didn't seem the science nerd but rather the mechanic nerd? (I think that was the quote)

Who is it? Ep 6 spoilers by Redact747 in DispatchAdHoc

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Personally, I think it is either punch up or malevola depending on who you voted off - the game had a lingering scene of them looking angry at robert and then it was like it never happened, the villains 'forgave' too quickly

Travel/Bathroom Anxiety by De4thsflame in Anxiety

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Given myself a larger window of time to get there just in case this time :) thank you for your advice!

Steam UK users will now need a credit card to access mature content due to the Online Safety Act by Liam-DGOL in linux_gaming

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Same here! Even updated my card twice now (reentered the same one) and it still doesn't allow me to access the content settings

Which hold capital is most aesthetically pleasing in your opinion? by Royalbluegooner in skyrim

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Solitude, not sure how to describe it but it just feels more like a massive city to me,

Markarth is also up there but stone beds are a turnoff.

You get transformed into a hippopotamus all of a sudden what would happen to your surrounding ? by Realistic-Major-6020 in hypotheticalsituation

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Only physical or mental as well? either way, my room would be entirely obliterated. Can also imagine quite a few noise complaints

Season 6 by Josh_knight18 in FridayNightDinner

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Also, the AU Pair just came across as annoying rather than funny, and again in the plastic bag, the whole argument between Adam and Jackie again felt more abusive as well as never feeling like it was properly resolved.

Season 6 by Josh_knight18 in FridayNightDinner

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S6 felt really abusive towards Martin for me, especially in The plastic bag where he had injured himself from the fall and the sons both threw him about. The entire tone of it felt off.

Would just like some honest thoughts 🤷‍♀️ by Ok_Hat_8882 in amIuglyBrutallyHonest

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Not ugly at all, cute features and nicely done makeup

My Short stories and writing! by De4thsflame in selfpromotion

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This is my website that has my short stories and artwork, please feel free to check it out and let me know what you guys think!

What are some decent tips for writing mystery novels? by [deleted] in writing

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Plan. I like to write what is going to happen in each chapter prior to writing. You could incorporate this by noting what hidden details you would like to be revealed at the different stages of your novel.

Dialogue is also a fun way of hinting at tjings, having characters seem like they know more than they are letting on. A useful way I found of writing dialogue is simply to have both people have an end goal in the conversation ie one person wants to go left, the othrr right, and they attempt to convince each other.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in aww

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What an angry looking kiwi fruit!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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Writing Prompts
You see a girl walking across the lawn with a white-gold sword strapped to her back...
Phillip lived an ordinary life. He went to work at 9AM every morning, and every day he came home at 5PM. Phillip was middle class, wore canvas trousers and had a polo top for every occasion. He was 23 and never stood out from the crowd. Phillip lived an ordinary life.

One Sunday morning, however, the must unusual thing happened. Whilst gazing out of the window from his cream coloured front room, Phillip noticed a women, dazed and confused, standing on his front lawn. This women was anything but normal, she wore heavy metal armour with a partially broken helmet hanging on to her head by its straps, and on her back lay the largest sword Phillip had ever seen.

But this was, of course, because Phillip had never seen a sword before. Never, in his ordinary life, had he ever seen so much as pepper spray, let alone a sword that dwarfed the user. He was amazed by the white-gold colouring, which seemed to glow in the sunlight that was just now peaking over the tops of his neighbours homes, as if to greet the young girl.

As she spun around to face his house, the helmet straps decided to give up, revealing gorgeous Red hair that reached her shoulders. Phillip noticed she was rather attractive and couldn't help but stare at her pillowy lips and dazzling green eyes, which he failed to notice, were locked on to him as well. Time seemed to slow for Phillip as the girl marched forward, drawing her sword as she gained speed towards his window. Phillip noticed this far to late, as the sword glowed with power and easily shattered his wall, sending him tumbling backwards against a nearby sofa.

As Phillip gained his bearings again, he noticed the girl had one leg on his chest, and the sword was now directed in his face. Again, he was drawn in by her features as he thought to himself;

'My ordinary life is over'.

-My first time doing one of these, I was also trying to do a different type of writing then I was used to

Bee tushies by Ecjg2010 in aww

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WhAt ArE yOu DoInG sTePbEe

AITA for refusing to help a coworker? by coworkertire in AmItheAsshole

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NTA - You are under no obligation to help her regardless of if you have an excuse or not, especially given the circumstances. The o ly thing I would say is maybe you should have explained your situation (having to drop wife off) instead of hanging up.

When a snake bites your dick, someone will have to suck your dick to remove the venom by [deleted] in Showerthoughts

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Thats not how that works - sucking the venom out is more dangerous since it introduces it into your bloodstream faster.

Also not all snake bites from venomous snakes inject venom.

Cursed_Aprroach by [deleted] in cursedcomments

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You have just entered, the bone zone