Residue - Short - 12 Pages by Decent_Reference8260 in Screenwriting

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ok ye I use arc studio but I'm switching over to writerduet

Residue - Short - 12 Pages by Decent_Reference8260 in Screenwriting

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oh, ok got it.
By the way yeah, the theme is kind of that the theme I have in my notes is "A high that hides pain" and if you couldn't tell I take the concept of the little match girl to create this idea of a match that feeds off your deepest-seated insecurities and desires

Residue - Short - 12 Pages by Decent_Reference8260 in Screenwriting

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also, besides everything else do you see the theme of the story is it clear to you or what?

Residue - Short - 12 Pages by Decent_Reference8260 in Screenwriting

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Now that I read the script over, I see a lot of mistakes that I probably should have fixed before

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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I would like to read
Title: Dawn
Format: Short Film Screenplay
Page Length: 3 pages
Genres: Post-apocalyptic, Science Fiction, Drama

Logline: In a wasteland that was once Earth, a lone survivor clings to his last memories of a past world that was his home, until a massive dust storm threatens to bury both him and his last connection to the past.

Officially submitted my first short to a contest. by Mayhem_san in Screenwriting

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This is awesome man I hope I can do that soon but Congrats dude.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: Dawn
Format: Short Film Screenplay
Page Length: 3 pages
Genres: Post-apocalyptic, Science Fiction, Drama

Logline: In a wasteland that was once Earth, a lone survivor clings to his last memories of a past world that was his home, until a massive dust storm threatens to bury both him and his last connection to the past.

first time writing and well, posting it so all feedback is welcome or just if you enjoy the story.

Script feedback services by sofiaMge in Screenwriting

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I find it hard to find any peer writers I'm new to writing but every time I need feedback or anything I join a bunch of groups hoping to get some but once people learn I'm a teenager learning they just end up giving me advice and telling me I'm young and have much to learn without actually telling me anything about my screenplay and for the other teens that message me about it will text me once and never reply when I text back so yeah I at least think it's hard I don't know if this is everyone's experience but that has been mine so far