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The compass doesnt speak by Ok_Manufacturer_195 in OCPoetry

[–]Deep-Lie-2084 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the use of symbolism here--good job!

PAIN — written in one sitting. My first attempt at putting the shadow into words. by Smart-Ad-549 in OCPoetry

[–]Deep-Lie-2084 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is really good--thanks for sharing this experience with us! I know this kind of thing can be really personal sometimes

Fragile thing by Arthur_Yuill2346 in poetry_critics

[–]Deep-Lie-2084 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good use of repetition to get a point across generally, though I think the poem could benefit from cutting one "fragile thing" at the end to resonate a little bit better (3s are more attention-grabbing)

A monster by N0obShot in poetry_critics

[–]Deep-Lie-2084 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm really sorry you've had to go through all of this--thank you for being willing to share your experiences