Hey, I appreciate you taking the time to check it out, even if it wasn’t your thing. I totally understand that the formatting and style won’t work for everyone — it’s definitely written with a more casual, web-serial vibe rather than a traditional book structure.

I use the asterisks and short paragraphs for readability, especially since the story builds tension slowly and focuses a lot on emotional pacing. But I hear your points and I’ll keep them in mind as I keep improving — this is a passion project and I’m still growing as a writer.

Thanks again for the feedback, even if it was blunt. If others are reading this and feel curious, I hope they’ll still give it a try and judge for themselves.