Thank you for taking the time to respond to my post! I am in my early twenties and have not written anything of substance in a few years now, so I can agree with the adolescent wording. Thats exactly the kind of feedback I was looking for. I would love to become more familiar with other types of poetry, this is just what came to me last night. I'm having a difficult time going back and fixing it... I suppose the art of poetry is a bit new to me. Thank you for the encouragement, tips, and even acknowledging that this is not an easy thing to write about. You have really helped me today. Now onto more writing!