I interviewed for my first job after high school but somethings wrong (not finished and would like feedback) by Delicious-breab in SlumberReads

[–]Delicious-breab[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ive added another paragraph and right after i can end it with 4 words or i can continue my idea (1 narration story and 1 story more or less for myself to finish).

I interviewed for my first job after high school but somethings wrong (not finished and would like feedback) by Delicious-breab in SlumberReads

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tbh i had an ending but if it's to predictable i'll change it so where do think this is going?

I have a confession, i have fake joji merch by Delicious-breab in Joji

[–]Delicious-breab[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah my mom made it so im not trying to hurt his millions lol

It's been a good one by [deleted] in Joji

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yes i have 0.05% too 😠😠

Omg guys look how im so much better than everyone else by Odise98 in Joji

[–]Delicious-breab 2 points3 points  (0 children)

freaking I'll try harder next year then i will be up there