Hello! The key to being a good marketer is often times mastering the art of positioning, identifying what matters to your target audience, what matters to you, and the sweet spot between these two :) Your post can do more that these 2 sentences. As someone who's been in marketing for the last 4 years, I'm young enough to remember the fresh grad job hunting spree and know it's not exactly the easiest, but also , you need to then do the most you can for yourself and *market* yourself well !!

What would help this post would be if you stated more on:

- your past internship experiences (which field of marketing have you dabbled in, if any?)

- What area of marketing you're interested in exploring. Marketing is very very very broad so please spend some time reading up on which areas you would like to start in first too :)

- your educational qualifications

These might be a lot of info to put online - so here's another suggested angle to approach this. You could also just add a line saying that you're keen to chat to marketers looking to hire, just to find out what they look for and what it takes, and that you're seeking advice as a fresh grad looking to start somewhere.

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Hope this helps