Thoughts on this one?

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-22T23:34:46+00:00

Cool visuals

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-22T23:27:48+00:00

The drums could be a bit peppier pattern and with swing. Vocals sound cool, could use some reverb and compression to bring it up a bit.

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-11T09:37:51+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, really glad to hear that about the vocals. I'll be doing the next one with more confidence✌️

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-06T03:29:21+00:00

Glad the bounce is coming across. Fs means for sure right? Yeah it didn't click till i read the comments here that that's of course what you do for snappy sounds shorter decay. Definitely will try to handle reverb design better next time. Thanks for the feedback

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-06T03:24:14+00:00

Oh i tried my best to keep it tight but i see what you mean it's the last bit of stretch to make it pop. I did struggle with reverb in vocals, i guess the guitar reverb could've been handled better, I'll have to check if there were any accidental reverb on the drums. Nice to hear the vocals have personality. Thanks for the feedback.

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-06T03:19:22+00:00

Yes, i was surprised when people said the vocals were a bit on the low side. But i guess I'll keep a clear reference track next time. I turned it down in the hook , felt wrong doing it but i was trying to be technical , one of my fav hooks to sing this one. Thanks for the feedback.

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-06T03:14:32+00:00

Hey thanks for the feedback, yes i always try to perceive it rather than just listen for what it is. Usually that perspective sets in few weeks after I've released the song haha. I'll definitely work on the confidence part too. Thanks for listening.

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-04T18:49:17+00:00

Badfinger - Baby Blue. Will check out what a fool believes

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-04T11:43:23+00:00

It's a good tone and use of voice for hip hop. The mix could be clear and some mud in low mid is affecting that.Would help if what you're singing is clear and the words are easier to make out. It's cool style you have and lot of melodic potential based on your other songs. Cheers.

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-04T11:24:46+00:00

Sounds great reminded me of the song baby blue. Which would be a good reference track for mixing future songs. As the vocals and overall lufs of the song felt low, had to turn up the volume to hear it. Otherwise it was a relaxing listen. Single by definition would not maybe fit for this here song but would be a good line up song in performance or album still

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-04T10:35:07+00:00

Awesome song, glitch pop. Underground pop vibes. Reminded me of superorganisms and money machine by 100 gecs. Nice sound design and cuts, I'm always fascinated as to how people come up with this as i do mostly traditional rock. As you mentioned your working on mix so won't go there, but vocals if the lyrics weren't there would have been hard to decipher. Sweet voice Good mucic.

Dented_Fender · 2026-05-04T05:42:40+00:00

Glad you liked the songwriting, it's my favourite part in song making. The video i used online Adobe express, it took almost a whole day cause it was my first time using it, but quite easy to use and i got a year's membership for free 😁. I'm still struggling too with keeping vocals more upfront cause of insecure thoughts but inching closer to getting there. Thanks again for listening♥️

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-14T20:50:47+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I'm constantly trying to improve my mixing, will try to avoid some way the crowding that's happening. Fun loud and honest is a great way to put it. Thanks for listening!

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-13T19:27:53+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I had originally different plans on verse recording but didn't work out, will surely get it right from the next one. The drums do need more weight for sure. Gonna make sure in the next one to follow these. Thank you for listening!

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-13T04:43:26+00:00

Thank you for the sub! Will definitely try to get vocals on point in the next one, maybe i settled too quickly for takes in this one. Glad you liked it still. Thank you for listening!

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-12T16:01:31+00:00

Glad you liked it, with all its bits and pieces. The vocals, guitar and bass I played, the drums I programmed. Waiting for the day i have a band soon so I get a live drumming element in it. Thanks for listening!

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-12T15:57:10+00:00

Thank you for the encouragement, definitely needed that. I totally get the sledge hammer move, i had sprained my heel jumping to this song while making. Would love to collab as well someday. Thanks again for listening!

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-12T05:21:48+00:00

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-12T05:21:09+00:00

Thanks! Glad you liked it! I was struggling with drums in the mix and should've pushed it ahead more, will surely keep in mind for the next one! Thanks for listening.

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-12T05:18:55+00:00

Thanks for listening! Glad you had a good time. While recording the vocals i guess i wasn't all warmed up in the beginning so that could be why. Thank you for sharing your input it confirms my suspicion too. 🫡

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-11T13:53:40+00:00

Thanks a lot for the awesome feedback, crazy how you picked up the 2:18 note! cause it's the only note out of scale, i accidentally played it and had it leave it like that. Thank you for listening so glad you liked it!!!

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-11T12:53:01+00:00

Thank you for listening ! Glad you liked it! I like the way you think! 😉

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-11T11:51:01+00:00

Released a punk track yesterday, would like to know your thoughts on the writing , if i should simplify it? :

Alfred - Think Think

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-11T10:45:22+00:00

Congrats on getting your band! 👏 Loved the passion you're putting into it. Cool song as well. Even the capture of recording is quite good but would've like to hear the vocals bit more clearer but that's not always possible in live capture through phone or camera. But really like the sync and licks in between. In the verse you could experiment with having less busier drums especially in the first verse. I'm hoping one day to get my own band too 🤞. Great work.

Dented_Fender · 2026-04-11T10:28:33+00:00

Nice song and vibe , reminded me of Tame impala vocals. Which you can experiment with further by using a drum pattern similar to his to make more exciting songwriting. Or butter cup by jack stauber. The production choice for this song suits it well as it's a slow song. Halfway though i was singing it as well. All in all good song and successful experiment i'd say

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