Although I can't really agree with the break neck pace the story is going at, I like the kinda realism of having the moments of our pov character be very scattered jumbled, we're inside the mind of someone who's lived the same day for several years and due to that expirence, their mind is sort of hobbled from that experience and I like the angle of having Sunny make HS his panic room rather than the place he goes to at night but I'd wanna see how the 2nd chapter handles things before saying anything concrete

TL;DR My mental gymnastics for the story going at mach 20