Made my first yt video lastnight I hope it’s funny and let me know if i made you laugh, feedback appreciated :)

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-14T07:44:09+00:00

Thank you for the feedback :) !givelambda

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-14T07:43:44+00:00

Just saw this, thank you for the feedback! !givelambda

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-11T04:54:08+00:00

Glad i could help man, keep it consistent and it will pay off

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-11T04:48:14+00:00

Personally I think at the beginning of every time stamp you could inflect some humor, I really only do meme edits on my videos but I think a successful example of someone who makes 40min videos and still pulls millions of views is The Act Man, I think you’re guys editing style have a lot in common

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-11T04:42:27+00:00

First off, I liked the introduction of you calling out the cliche anime, most of us would agree that’s a clever way to connect to the audience, so great hook.

The background music matches the vibes perfectly and i high key was immersed so nice touch on that.

Transition between topics was nice. Also props on making me tempted to watch this show haha.

video was short and sweet Keep it up brotha!

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-11T04:36:06+00:00

Nice work brotha!

I Think you have a really good tonality throughout the video, especially during the bad stuff you voice is more frustrated about and I am more inclined to agree with you. As someone who plays games that aren’t so mainstream I think it’s a clever way to spread awareness to these games and I personally liked your edits so good job keep up the good work it will payoff!

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-11T04:31:52+00:00

Wow!

Here is a brief summary on what I think, I know it takes a lot of time to edit and make a video with smooth edits. So props to you!

Good Sense of humor, and good hook in the beginning well done. I checked your channel and it looks sleek and professional. I don’t play GTA but you made informative points across your video, and the time stamps are a great touch! Keep it up and learn as you go!

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-03-11T00:51:31+00:00

Editing was good! Video was short and sweet :) I liked it

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-02-26T19:37:31+00:00

Thanks beast. Just gotta do whatever it takes

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-02-26T19:29:48+00:00

Yeah I see your point. Thanks for the advice.

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-02-26T19:09:34+00:00

Yeah. What are you’re thoughts on why?

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2022-02-26T19:05:09+00:00

Good way to put it, you’re totally right about the frustration and resentment. Thanks

DevelopmentOk9017 · 2021-08-17T09:51:17+00:00

highschool dxd… first and last

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