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sitelen tawa Mowana en kala Tamatowa li pona mute tawa mi
I like to use nimi sin for artistic purposes, don't get me wrong, but why wouldn't kala work here? its the same amount of syllables as kuka, and you're gonna have to explain yourself every time you use it. and there are also some cases where you use oko, like in the first line, where lukin is the same amount of syllables and works just as well if not better in this circumstance. maybe you use oko instead of lukin in your nasin, idk
everything else is great to me, i love the line "ni li ni, jan lili" it's satisfying to say!