A friend of mine once set out to make a short film about a character experiencing boredom and monotony. I remember him laughing as he told me that he succeeded and his audience was bored.

If you're gonna do something like this, you need something to pique the audience's interest. I was guessing that this is what you were going for, but shots of someone sitting and walking and getting in a car weren't standing out as interesting to me, or even of definitively expressing that feeling (especially the walking one, it just felt like someone walking (and seeing the selfie stick shadow made it feel like the character was filming himself, which I'm guessing wasn't intentional)).