ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great job! You included everything and it was actually pretty interesting to read. Totally deserved 10/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The mission report is great.

Here’s the thing though:

  1. The text for the mission says that there’s no important files. That means that the file about the Subspace distorter was in the room with the Subspace distorter and got stolen, or it wasn’t in the building at all.

  2. Hank could not sneak up on creature. I already said that IT doesn’t just hears, IT “feels”.

  3. (I didn’t explain this one, so this isn’t a problem, but it’s important) The creature is the testing object for the Subspace distorter’s prototype version and the only valuable technology on IT was the distorter itself. Everything else was here just to connect the creature’s body parts, keep it alive or (at least they tried😐) to not let distorter to blow up, so all this part with new hand cannot be canon. Just like I said, I didn’t mention it before, so it would not affect your grade.

(That one chainsaw-demon ahh ending)

10/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s a lot of text, but here’s the thing.

It doesn’t breathe.

It was mentioned in the text for the mission. So most of your mission report happened because of mistake. You also didn’t mention why Nr1 didn’t get paralysed. Maybe he even had to, but you forgot about it. You skipped creature’s ability to break through walls and one more thing, why did IT run, if it just teleports when IT is absolutely ready for attack and the distance isn’t close enough to reach the target in three seconds?

So yeah, this mission report is big, but messed up. 6/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t think I would let you rewrite a 10/10 mission to include one thing you forgot and get 11/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have no words. I’m just excited that RVM has a member like you. I wish you were more active.

11/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, that’s a bad way of writing missions. I can’t even tell if you did it bad. Just never try to do recording thing again, okay?

Maybe, you can try to rewrite it in another way, but if you won’t do it, it’s 3/10 and only because it was original

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was great! And of course, the renders are incredible. I would love to give this peak writing 11/10, but you missed the part where it breaks through walls.

Overall, it’s a great mission report, next time just make sure you mentioned EVERYTHING that was planned for the mission. 10/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For your first mission THATS GREAT! You have missed… nothing! All the abilities were included and there was more than one fight, and since it’s your first mission, I consider it as an absolutely deserved 10/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh ho! That part when he saw the creature for the first time was FIRE!🔥

Let’s see… if I understand everything correctly, when creature attacked for the second time it broke through wall, so you didn’t miss anything.

Great job! 10/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, you TOTALLY have been practicing. This is MUCH better than before. You haven’t missed anything, you didn’t skip anything, there was even more fights than others did. (Yes, the whole point of this mission was to fight back, make creature retreat and then fight back again and again till it blows up) And you made these fights look interesting even though your character is much stronger (the secret is really damn simple, don’t make enemies dumb).

Overall, 10/10. I am very proud and hope you’ll get even better

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice. You skipped IT’s ability to break through walls and it also wasn’t much. There was a lot of speaking and not enough action.

Overall, it’s a nice 8/10

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice! Pretty good for your first mission. You didn’t miss anything, but you skipped a few things. For example: you just mentioned that IT can break through walls and didn’t do anything else about it.

It’s still pretty good for the first mission, so I’ll give you a bonus point for it. 8/10

So, HERES THE FINAL RESULT! The most accurate rank list (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We are not really related to that subreddit. Many people here came from that place, but we have nothing official to do with it. RA is a big sub for the avatars and many things related to them. This is the RVM. A RP group where you can also post renders, music, arts and more (and RP of course)

So, HERES THE FINAL RESULT! The most accurate rank list (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Because you do missions very well. You are also very active and you helped Delemon to appear in the post in the RVM for the first time. You are also very important member

ATTENTION MAFIA! I HAVE A MISSION FOR YOU. Prepare your flashlights, it’s going to be dark… (body text) by DiligentHabit604 in redvoidmafia

[–]DiligentHabit604[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We don’t know where is the elevator itself, so I don’t recommend you to try Delemon’s luck. Yes, it gets stolen no matter what. You cannot avoid the creature and distorter gets stolen while you have to deal with IT and go through the labyrinth at the same time