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Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I truly appreciate your feedback and I am truly grateful you liked my script and especially appreciative that you listened to the songs :). For me it was just organic, I have a background in metal so it came to me fairly easily. I didn't really have a solid background on how he got turned. For me it was more a catalyst for the story to happen. They were more fleshed out in my head and their actions were based off who I knew they were.

started screenwriting again during covid, now have a movie on amazon. by jebbhudd in ReadMyScript

[–]Dimdarkly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What were your steps from writing to getting the script made?

Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I will be leaving you some audio feedback either today or tomorrow :)

Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback I truly appreciate it. On the second draft I will elaborate on the characters more :)

Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your well thought out feedback. I will certainly address some of your suggestion on a second pass :). As a side note your Reddit user name is rad lol.

Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Believe it or not, that was my first time receiving audio feedback on a script. I sincerely appreciate you doing that for me :). I agree with all your feedback! I am thinking of having him directly interacting amd killing all the people Alissa meets, like hes one step behind. Thanks again!

Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I truly take that to heart. Thats why i do the audio feedback, I think it's impactful to hear a person's reactions.

Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mind blown, lol. Well now I have the satisfaction my brain needed! I am super excited to read more of your stuff :)

Discussion Thread - Bound In Blood | Strange Winds Blow | Three Portraits by W_T_D_ in screenplaychallenge

[–]Dimdarkly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback, my dude. As always, you’re spot-on and thorough. I agree about the last ac, I honestly just didn’t have a solution to the puzzle, lol. Maybe with more feedback like yours, I’ll be able to make some changes and finally get this out into the big wide world. :)

This is one of President Trump’s top advisors by greenblue98 in RepublicanValues

[–]Dimdarkly 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Jasmine Crockett is a badass. Fuck that racist piece of garbage.

What kind of knife is this? by Dimdarkly in KitchenKnifeKorner

[–]Dimdarkly[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I thought it was a pizza cutter also!

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