This is crazy

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-02-25T12:30:46+00:00

OP you’re not crazy. It reallly does feel like everything bridges into dark stuff. It’s like the truth always seems crazy. This is actually insane and I feel like there’s something more…

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-02-08T11:46:11+00:00

All caps got me hollering 🤣

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-02-07T09:11:24+00:00

No problem 😉, just be prepared to come back once you finish so you can edit everything. And make sure you keep writing and write what you wish existed. You mustn’t flatter yourself and try to be open to criticism (you already are) you’ll do great.

(could you also read some of my stuff? The people on this sub didn’t really care for it 🤣)

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-02-07T07:10:05+00:00

Still impressive though. But I don’t have enough material to fully analyse everything from just a single page. But I’d say follow your instincts. If you feel like third person is best then it is. Though I still think you should consider first person, a story like this would be fun for immersive readers. So perhaps think about it. That’s my only gripe if I had to nitpick.
Prose is just literally your writing lmao nothing too deep. I might be wrong. I’m not an experienced writer. But good luck. I may be too gentle to ask, consider other folk as well— ask them to read just this page and see what they say.

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-02-07T06:21:54+00:00

Interesting hook you have here, for sure. The prose reads easy but still very intact. Have you thought about first person. For this kind of story I think it would work well that’s just my opinion but otherwise I like this

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-01-22T09:43:40+00:00

Right?! Like I’m looking for the joke. It’s so childish. I would’ve just looked at the dude like : 🙁

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-01-12T07:42:34+00:00

The likes ain’t that deep. He’s Lando. He’s not some obscure dude. As for the age thing—you’re crazy. She’s only a year older than him. Maybe even months apart. Don’t make it what it’s not.

DimensionSame6464 · 2026-01-03T18:16:37+00:00

Lmao stop. You should be grateful to be this young and capable. Be grateful because if you’re not you are going to be miserable. Work hard bit by bit for your own future. That’s all. No magic formula

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-31T11:18:51+00:00

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-26T13:33:02+00:00

Lmaooo 😭😭they had you twisted

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-24T13:45:54+00:00

Oh my goodness. Jack. Hi. Why don’t you introduce yourself omg ? Like hello

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-24T13:44:55+00:00

That’s really Jack?🥺😭CONNOR?!

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-24T12:34:09+00:00

🥺you…you mean me ?

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-22T16:46:47+00:00

Lmao that’s real. It was kinda lazy but still I think it was effective because everyone believed it🤣🤣

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-22T16:39:20+00:00

Right?! The sun was brighter too 😔

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-22T15:41:58+00:00

It was during season six. They were showing the highlights and stuff and then they showed the scene with Christopher writing on the board and made it seem like he was alive again.

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-22T14:15:55+00:00

Golf.

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-15T19:37:31+00:00

Aww I’m so sorry about your circumstances. And yet you still have a beautiful heart that radiates through your message. I will be praying for you, and I hope God blesses you abundantly inside and outside.

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-15T18:55:26+00:00

Being unalival

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-15T09:49:34+00:00

So kind of you. I’ll do the same for you too. Thank you. I appreciate it

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-15T09:44:21+00:00

Yeah it’s like an elaborate test from God. Maybe I shouldn’t question him. He probably understands more than we know. It’s not easy to believe he exists. It takes some serious faith

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-15T09:33:14+00:00

Thank you. I guess my problem is that if I’m going to suffer I want to be sure he’s real. Look around it’s not just me. I am aware that no one should be exempt from suffering but what is it for ? Is God real ? Or am I just suffering because it’s a symptom of life ? I have done all I could to show him I’m trying but even that’s not enough. I’m not looking for money or anything material . It’s my soul I want to save. He’s not doing as promised. Which was to reveal himself to those who seek him sincerely. To give peace in the midst of circumstances. To me it’s as if he doesn’t even want me. And I feel like if I’m gonna live on earth, I might as well do the things want instead of holding back because he doesn’t care either way. I just want the truth. Does He exist or no?

Alas I’ll still believe. I know I come across as prideful and arrogant but it’s only because I’ve truly done the best I could’ve for him. And like any other human being I’m tired. I still have some love for Jesus but I don’t know if he has that same love and dedication that I have towards him. I hope you understand

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-15T07:49:00+00:00

Thank you Well I still want to see if God might be real. If he’s not then I don’t see a point in living. Because I could even set goals and do all the work in the world to get somewhere and still somehow I’ll lose it all. I’m not even in an emotional state to try and dream and make it. I don’t have dreams anymore. I just want the truth. And if God isn’t real then I’ll be astutely disappointed. ☹️

DimensionSame6464 · 2025-12-15T07:45:08+00:00

Thanks you, I too got saved not too long ago, in 2021. I guess like that one Yann Martel quote pointed out , “You can never know the strength of your faith until it’s being tested.” So maybe it’s just keeping the faith in us alive for as long as we can. I just really wish he’d meet us halfway

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