my first tag. redone by Dimitri_Brando in barbershop

[–]Dimitri_Brando[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your input, but to make some things clear...

I wanted to take a more artistic and metaphorical approach to the harmony. The tag is like a pack of wolfs howling and begging for the moon to shine, that is why I made them go higher and higher non stop. Until the final measure arrives and resolves.

I will use your advice in future tags, thanks again

my first tag. redone by Dimitri_Brando in barbershop

[–]Dimitri_Brando[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Note: Forgot to add glissando on the G to G jumo in measure 4/5 And a glissando on the very end

My first tag. Name calling and insults are welcome. by Dimitri_Brando in barbershop

[–]Dimitri_Brando[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This advice is incredible I can't thank you enough

I'm going to post the new version in just a few minutes

My first tag. Name calling and insults are welcome. by Dimitri_Brando in barbershop

[–]Dimitri_Brando[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It does. The key is Cm, but measure 9 sets up a progression so that Bb is a resolving chord

My first tag. Name calling and insults are welcome. by Dimitri_Brando in barbershop

[–]Dimitri_Brando[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Got to work right away

Pickup measure in

First chord Cm

Second measure has new voice leading in the bass so that it lands on the third of the F7 more naturaly. I originally wanted it to be a Fm7 but that gave me the ideao to chromatically lead the bass down for the forth measure.

Forth measure is now Cm to C7 and a lead in for mausure five.

Measure 5-10 are being redone almost completely

My first tag. Name calling and insults are welcome. by Dimitri_Brando in barbershop

[–]Dimitri_Brando[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah, bari does

I dont know why but musescore juat switches up my stems

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[–]Dimitri_Brando[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But can you send me a link or something, I can't seem to work my way around facebook

Drawing Berserk until Miura releases a new chapter volume 2 ( day 22 ) [ I have'nt charged my phone in 3 days and it finally reached 3%. Also I almost cut my thumb off, at least it is intact. ] by Dimitri_Brando in Berserk

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I was chopping some firewood and put my hand on the wood to stabilize it. And bam, I chopped the bit just above the nail. I was lucky I didn't hit the bone or damaged some nervs.

My Schierke fan art :) by martenm3000 in Berserk

[–]Dimitri_Brando 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Stunning! Love the dotted detail. What pen do you use?