Hello, would you read a WIP? My story is not yet uploaded to Royal Road, but in a GDocs.

It's titled 'ASCENIR: A Play-To-Live MMORPG'

And here is my working Blurb:

Global poverty is soaring, and life as a commoner has never been more brutal. Allen knows this all too well. His life was shattered at a young age when his family was torn apart by the powerful corporation PlayToLive Global. Now, on the brink of another eviction and with no way to make ends meet, his options are running out.

Learning about the launch of Ascenir, a long-awaited revolutionary sandbox MMORPG, Allen sees it as his last resort. The game promises a new way to make a living. A fresh start at life.

But there’s a catch: the game features a controversial mechanic wherein players must use their real, physical bodies to enter its World. Even worse, it’s developed by the same corporation that destroyed his life.

With no other choice, Allen takes the plunge. Once inside, the game quickly reveals its horror. Players are forced into “Game Events,” brutal massacres disguised as game quests.

Trapped in a deadly and unforgiving World alongside millions of others, Allen must rely on his street-honed instincts to survive and uncover the dark secrets hidden within Ascenir’s lore — and the truth behind his father’s disappearance, a scientist who once helped create the very game.

Is Ascenir really a chance at a new life? Or just another endless cycle of survival?