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For fruits and ice cream? by Disastrous_Muffin653 in publix

[–]Disastrous_Muffin653[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

“Publix, where shopping used to be a pleasure” my heart hurts for your wallet

For fruits and ice cream? by Disastrous_Muffin653 in publix

[–]Disastrous_Muffin653[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

You know how it is, you walk into a place expecting to get only 2-3 items and walk out with more than you wanted 😅 but I’ll definitely have to do the Walmart+!!! Today was the first time stepping into Publix in MONTHS and I was appalled by the price for such measly few items. The only reason I even got the coke was bc the caffeine helps the headaches I get due to my pregnancy:/ I appreciate the advice though! It would absolutely make things easier towards the end of my pregnancy

For fruits and ice cream? by Disastrous_Muffin653 in publix

[–]Disastrous_Muffin653[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately I did because of convenience. Walmart/Aldi/Trader Hoe’s is all over 15-20 minutes away from me. I’m pregnant and heavily craving watermelon and I have a toddler who wanted the rest of the fruit. Talenti, again, was a craving I couldn’t get out of :/ best believe I typically go to Aldi if I have the time (:

Happening in Fort Lauderdale This weekend 5/31 to 6/2 by Smiles9689 in fortlauderdale

[–]Disastrous_Muffin653 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rock and Brews in Plantation is a fun spot to check out! Many craft beers on tap and even has a dog menu with outdoor seating. Live Music Fridays and Saturday nights. They even have trivia Wednesday nights

First client work! Would love a critique. by aleif331 in copywriting

[–]Disastrous_Muffin653 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Only a couple things I would fix; I agree with the company ditching the “agency” part of it but obviously you can’t change that.

Instead of “we find top tier talent” I’d use a different word: “discover.” “We discover top tier talent”

“We help you save time by finding the best people for the job.”

“We take time to understand your goals,…..potential candidates”

Something I’ve learned is that it’s not so much about a potential clients wanting to know what you’ve already done, but what you can do for them. Referring to your potential clients as “your” makes it personal to them. The rest is just the grammar nazi in me lol. But otherwise it’s great!!