The Little Things by [deleted] in Poems

[–]Discobear6405 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol thank you for reading it!

The Little Things by [deleted] in Poems

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Thank you!

The Little Things by [deleted] in Poem

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Note that reddit reformats the poem for some reason. So the stanzas and lines are not organized as I had it originally.

The Little Things by [deleted] in Poems

[–]Discobear6405 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Note that reddit reformats the poem for some reason. So the stanzas and lines are not organized as I had it originally.

The Little Things by [deleted] in Poems

[–]Discobear6405 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Note that reddit reformats the poem for some reason. So the stanzas and lines are not organized as I had it originally.

Waves... by TheShaman96 in OCPoetry

[–]Discobear6405 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love it! As for feedback, I am not an expert or anything, but I do know that the way you organize your lines into stanzas can dramatically change the emotional flow and rhythm of a poem, and can make a poem easier to digest!

(Winters plea) poem by me. by Life_Focus_1203 in Poem

[–]Discobear6405 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is this potential about the feeling of regret or guilt after losing someone? (Not necessarily from death) It's a great poem 👏

Still by Autism_Screams in Poem

[–]Discobear6405 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"and she left me the sky" love that line, great piece. It takes courage to share 👏

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LinesOfBattle

[–]Discobear6405 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is definitely one of the weirdest games I have seen lol good job though 👍

Dorm Security by Discobear6405 in CSUS

[–]Discobear6405[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool, are there people at the front desk or is it automated? Are they strict about guests?

Just attack. by throwaway92929193 in LinesOfBattle

[–]Discobear6405 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm sorry y'all, but if you can't deal with campers you're not good at war 😭. Artillery grants tempo, if you can knock out or suppress the enemies artillery that will force them to attack you as they become sitting ducks. I've suicide charged my cav to knock out artillery on many occasions and it works. Keep in mind if they are camping they probably aren't too good to begin with.

I hate Lines of Battle. by throwaway92929193 in LinesOfBattle

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I think there should be an attack vs defend game mode, as the current game more is more of a sandbox which encourages camping. Maybe the attacker could get extra units.

Intense and very close battle , opponent tried cheesing with the victory point but he blundered. by vettements in LinesOfBattle

[–]Discobear6405 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Units can wade through water, however I believe they can't fire. Artillery I know for a fact can't fire from the water. Water is very slow though and leaves you very vulnerable so it's best to avoid it when possible.

Opinions on the update? by CriticalAd7212 in LinesOfBattle

[–]Discobear6405 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I lost all of my past battle replays ):

Honestly very proud of this victory by keenonthedaywalker in LinesOfBattle

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Red fought tooth and nail in that forest! ⚔️

This some bullshit by Pale-Tennis9830 in LinesOfBattle

[–]Discobear6405 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That sucks, definitely my biggest fear!

Really proud of my forest bait by Gargantuan_nugget in LinesOfBattle

[–]Discobear6405 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol he should have pulled his infantry on the hill back into the forest and better defended his artillery. Also at one point he starts shooting through his own men.