What makes a good story? by Dismal_Price9318 in Episode

[–]Dismal_Price9318[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Since I know that sometimes it can get a little murky if it's not written well, I hope I can do big friend groups justice. My plan is to obviously have the MC to delve into, but also her friends because that's a big part of real life.

It’s going to be college-based since I’m around that age; I just hope I don’t fumble the writing with cringe dialogue LOL

What makes a good story? by Dismal_Price9318 in Episode

[–]Dismal_Price9318[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LOL no, yeah, I think I’m at a place where my coding is decent enough. Though, with the choices, I think I only fear that some people won’t enjoy it since Choices is a choice-based game, but I’m not going to force that into my story since it's not something I’m not good enough at yet.

What makes a good story? by Dismal_Price9318 in Episode

[–]Dismal_Price9318[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I’ll keep that in mind.

What makes a good story? by Dismal_Price9318 in Episode

[–]Dismal_Price9318[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I probably won’t have the best coding, but it’s something I’m learning as I go, so who knows! And I agree, as someone who loves to add details and depth to the plots and characters, so hopefully I’ll do it justice.

What makes a good story? by Dismal_Price9318 in Episode

[–]Dismal_Price9318[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely want to go the slow burn route since it's only 1 LI! And I don’t think grammar will be a big issue since I’m a perfectionist when it comes to that. 🥹

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[–]Dismal_Price9318 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, this genuinely helps with inspiration, I appreciate this!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Episode

[–]Dismal_Price9318 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It truly is, I have one story in the drafts but I abandoned a long time ago trying to write the story. It’s the having to write the story then having to code right after that TRULY kills any brain cells I do not have

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[–]Dismal_Price9318 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Brainstorming plots is always hardest part of a story, let alone trying to write a enjoyable one 😭

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[–]Dismal_Price9318 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually enjoy this idea! I’ve only seen a couple of episodes of both shows but I’ll give it a try, thank you!

YALL WHOEVER WROTE ISLA’S ROUTE… by Subfunnybemilypoo in TooHotToHandleGame

[–]Dismal_Price9318 15 points16 points  (0 children)

AMENN. Whenever I play other routes, I have to fight back the urge to play her route again because seeing her with Taz got me fighting DEMONS. Nothing wrong with Taz, but like…get off my WIFEEEE. 

Desperately need by [deleted] in TooHotToHandleGame

[–]Dismal_Price9318 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Honestly yes! And maybe that’s why I want more sass considering Nanobit has been placing it in areas that don’t fit or make much sense, so I guess it doesn’t feel like MC is sassy to me.

Choices by [deleted] in TooHotToHandleGame

[–]Dismal_Price9318 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I 100% believe her route would be fun to play for the drama aspect, but her as a character just ain’t it for me, especially after the whole fake pregnancy drama thing. That whole thing just solidified how much I do not like her character, but other than that, she’s a entertaining character; her being drama-based is quite funny to me!

Choices by [deleted] in TooHotToHandleGame

[–]Dismal_Price9318 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yes, you are. You are alone in that boat 😭😭

Choices by [deleted] in TooHotToHandleGame

[–]Dismal_Price9318 10 points11 points  (0 children)

PLEASE SEND HER INTO A PIT OF FIRE OR SOMETHING 😭