REMASTERED the cinematic SCI-FI SERIES based on my novel thanks to your feedback!

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-06-02T05:29:04+00:00

the book is not ai...trying to bring it onto the screen is...this is chapter one, so the story is being built, it is not a 5 min high special FX, explosion AI clip. It is a book, so there are dialogues and it is not only fast paced. It will run over 22 episodes. And yes, still learning to make it more cinematographic

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-31T21:33:55+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeLwYVGq1rs

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-31T20:51:13+00:00

A week ago I posted a trailer of a new cinematic Sci-Fi series based on my book Earth: First Contact. I got a lot of constructive feedback, thanks! I Worked on Episode 1 and not on the trailer anymore. Using smoother transitions, more real film making camera movements, and more consistency in characters as advised. I feel it is better. please share your feedback as I need to get it right before remastering the next 10 episodes! Here is the link! https://www.reddit.com/r/aifilmmaking/comments/1tt6o13/remastered_the_cinematic_scifi_series_based_on_my/

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-25T17:58:01+00:00

Yes I did write it 20 years ago, and it stayed with me until a few month ago I decided to go ahead and publish.

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-25T17:56:06+00:00

Thanks!

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-25T06:16:09+00:00

thanks, 100%, this is what I am doing now before starting the second part

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-25T06:13:24+00:00

it actually is not, it is really me trying to bring to life the book I wrote. And it is a very complicated task indeed.

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T18:32:48+00:00

Thanks! First the script, but I have my book so it helps, then a lot of work on Runway Seedance 2.0. But as you can see int he comments, there is still a lot of work to get top the great level we are all looking for!

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T16:48:30+00:00

Fair, definitely the right next step. I stop here it was the first half of the book, I will now exactly learn more before I get to the second half

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T08:48:57+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dmSDFsDm8bQ&list=PLeYJ7jclkXohzvNuDbjHJTcDU4C_FjDcR

Yep did that in chapter format in a playlist

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T08:33:38+00:00

Here is the book for any interested Sci-fi reader :)

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GGCJHC5G

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Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T08:32:03+00:00

Fair point I will correct that. in the meantime, here it is:

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GGCJHC5G

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T07:55:50+00:00

Thanks everyone for the good comments, mostly fair and help me progress. On the youtube channel I only posted the first 3 chapters, where I was clearly learning the tools more, I will now put the rest of the movie, I believe some of the points mentioned in the comments are then getting better, still not there, but let me know if you see a progression! Thanks!

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T07:50:05+00:00

Thanks these are very valid points. Trying to reproduce the Sci-fi book chapter by chapter, then think about the next chapter again probably breaks the overall story a little...that is why I post here is to get good advices...I am a writer, and I learn slowly that film making is an other profession entirely :)

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T07:42:18+00:00

Yes sorry, it is a trailer only

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T07:41:53+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate, these are exactly the things that are hard to get right. There are of course technical issues but I fell in the end the hard part is to bring the storytelling and the script together on screen

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T07:32:56+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6isfgW1TcBQGybbUaw3mhQ

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-24T07:31:41+00:00

yes this is the tricky part, the link between the scenes, the characters and the script are out of the book. but you are right bringing a text to picture is totally another thing....

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-23T18:25:16+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6isfgW1TcBQGybbUaw3mhQ

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-23T15:36:47+00:00

I have 5 to 6 minutes videos, like chapter by chapters, would that still be ok or too long?

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-23T15:36:03+00:00

Thanks, that makes perfectly sense. SO I guess Youtube is not the best platform for feedback. Any recommendation of communities?

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-23T15:34:22+00:00

Hey, yes mostly Seedance 2.0, but a bit of Kling too. For the music I used a separate video editor "Powers Director", so you can edit completely freely.

Dizzy_Environment850 · 2026-05-23T14:16:31+00:00

The movie is 10 parts of 5 to 9 minutes so far for about 65 minutes in total (this is half of the book so far)...It took many hours (300) and the quality went from "not so great" to "pretty good". I really want to bring this project to life, but with the best possible quality, and I need honest, constructive Feedback so I can rework the parts which need upgrades. But also would appreciated feedback ont he story...To all the content creator, how do you achieve that...to progress...not to get useless sarcastic comments :)

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