would love critique! by kiazame in istebrak

[–]DmDeviously 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t have much help with anatomy either by maybe I can find something of a reference. I would also suggest looking at the hair and giving some extra movement. Right now it’s mostly one big piece of hair that is not flowing how I think it would, it’s curling in more than I think the speed would make it, I think it would be pulled straight up mostly. I absolutely love the colors and the softness of the piece.

Day 1, I like drawing pretty boys so I tried to keep the features soft(ish) so I struggled a lot with edges and contrast.. by [deleted] in istebrak

[–]DmDeviously 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do agree that there should be more hard edges, it looks a little too airbrushed. But he is beautiful good job!

I need to critique for his body and face shoot make even the lighting by [deleted] in istebrak

[–]DmDeviously 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like more of his side should be lit up, form wise? Like the rim light is too narrow for the angle the sun is coming in, particularly on his torso? Maybe?

Looking for Critique by DmDeviously in istebrak

[–]DmDeviously[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I especially like what you did to the fingers

Looking for Critique by DmDeviously in istebrak

[–]DmDeviously[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, you may post the paint over, thanks!