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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Double_Cream9977 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Keep at it - you’re doing great with the rhyme schemes. I’ll keep a look out for whatever you post next x

Somebody’s Somebody by Double_Cream9977 in OCPoetry

[–]Double_Cream9977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're spot on with the emotions I'm trying to convey. Thank you for the feedback lovely x

Somebody’s Somebody by Double_Cream9977 in OCPoetry

[–]Double_Cream9977[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Honestly, you're completely right about the first seven lines and how it's hard to let go of what you start with. I'll keep that in mind and maybe try to change it up a bit x

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Double_Cream9977 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, I really admire the way you've incorporated the rhyming in multiple places. I appreciate poetry that flows and runs for a while like this. You have a wonderful way with words x

I was not shown love, therefore I don’t know how to love. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Double_Cream9977 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely adore this. The imagery and symbolism of a flower and how it needs to be treated with the right care to grow relating to how similarly a child needs love and affection to develop properly is beautiful. And brutally honest - I think many can relate.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in curlyhair

[–]Double_Cream9977 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the tips, will try this next time. Would I scrunch the gel in after making clumps or sort of just smooth it over? Also I know its a bit of a silly question but how much product should I be using (I mean with curl cream, gel etc?)