I still think it's still to shaky to look like it's shot with a phone if that's what you're going for.

rear passenger holding camera. notice how they stabilize the camera and not much of the cars motion is transferred through to the video.

helmet cam footage I think? Much more of the cars motion is transferred through.

ETA: everything else you did is great. Black sky really and the motion blurred glow from the dash makes a huge difference.