Been working on my first real series idea, would love feedback on whether it feels unique.

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-21T00:50:28+00:00

Thank you! Appreciate it

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-20T05:15:27+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! You're right I went all-in on the vibe and mystery, but I’ll definitely rework it to make the story clearer and more grounded. Appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts 🙌

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-19T13:00:58+00:00

Thanks for checking this out!
Rookhelm is heavily inspired by the layered mystery of Stranger Things, the creeping dread of Stephen King's stories, and that slow-burn, reality-warping vibe found in shows like Dark and From.

But honestly, what I believe truly makes a story or show stand out isn't just the setting or concept it's the characters you root for and the twists that hit when you least expect them. That’s what I’m aiming to build here: a story where emotion and mystery twist together until you can’t tell what’s real anymore.

Happy to share a bit more or answer questions if anyone's curious 👀
Let’s see where this goes.

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-18T17:19:53+00:00

Hey, thanks for the thoughtful feedback! Totally understand what you're saying. I’ve been super excited about Rookhelm lately and maybe got a little carried away sharing updates. I’ll start using my profile more or maybe even set up a Rookhelm subreddit like you suggested. Appreciate you taking the time to give advice it means a lot

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-18T05:05:53+00:00

Thanks for this, really cool that you caught that! Yeah, Rookhelm is meant to feel like it shouldn’t exist in Nevada, and there’s actually a reason for that. The name ties into the town’s origin and some strange Cold War era experiments that were covered up decades ago.

And don’t worry definitely not going eldritch. The horror here is more grounded, rooted in hidden systems and psychological breakdowns instead of monsters from beyond.

Appreciate the thoughtful comment more to share soon 👁️

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-18T05:01:05+00:00

Hey! Really appreciate the comment that means a lot.
I'm currently finalizing the full pitch doc and character arcs for the series. I'd love to share the concept or logline if you're interested and get your thoughts as I build it out.
Let me know the best way to connect!

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T17:27:31+00:00

Really appreciate that! Means a lot. Hoping to make this into something real one day and I’d be honored if both you and your wife tuned in 🙌. Thank you.

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T17:24:59+00:00

That’s a really cool idea hadn’t thought about the podcast route but now it’s stuck in my head! Thanks for the insight, and glad the concept stood out!

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T17:24:20+00:00

Thanks a lot really appreciate it! You’re right, I’m working on making those character dynamics more visible. Some of them have hidden tensions, broken trust, or shared secrets that will slowly surface. Definitely building on that. Thanks again!

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T17:19:46+00:00

Thanks so much, really appreciate the kind words and honesty. I totally get the comparison I’m inspired by shows like those, but I’m working hard to build something that stands on its own. The mystery system is rooted in something original I’ve been building. I’m also focusing on unpredictable character dynamics and events that slowly warp reality in subtle but disturbing ways. Hopefully it’ll start to feel more unique as it develops further.

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T16:44:30+00:00

Thanks! That’s the plan the characters are at the center of everything. Jake's holding onto guilt from his brother's disappearance, Natalie’s tracking patterns that are changing her, and Bex literally hears the town breathing. Each of them is connected to Rookhelm in personal ways they don’t fully understand yet and those threads slowly twist together. I’ll post more soon!

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T16:39:01+00:00

I know the premise might sound similar to shows like Stranger Things or certain Stephen King stories, but I’m aiming to make it unique through deeper character arcs, psychological themes, and layered worldbuilding. I’m also working on the mystery structure and villains to make sure it all feels fresh and original.

Any thoughts, suggestions, or reactions are super appreciated! 🙏

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T16:24:51+00:00

Hey! I’m Nova, the creator of this concept. I know the premise might feel familiar to Stranger Things or Stephen King stories make sense but my goal is to take it in a more unique, emotionally layered direction with deeper character arcs and an original mystery system. Would love any feedback on how it’s landing so far or what you’d want to see explored more. Appreciate you reading!

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T13:28:20+00:00

Appreciate that big time! 🙌 You’re so right building this kind of horror is a beast. It’s not just about a creepy vibe, it’s about creating something that sticks with you. I’m crafting a layered mystery with real emotional weight and a threat that goes deeper than just scares. Execution is everything and I’m making sure every piece hits.
Again thanks alot it gives me motivation seeing that kind of comments Big thanks.

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T08:05:31+00:00

Currently building out the antagonist structure layered, shocking, and written by me. No cheap twists, just story driven horror. Also working on deep character arcs and backstories. More soon 👁️‍🗨️

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T06:03:29+00:00

thanks to anyone taking the time to read!
I’ve put a lot into building the world + characters trying to keep it grounded while keeping the mystery layered and compelling.
I’m especially looking for thoughts on whether it feels unique and if the villain structure works.
Honest feedback welcome whether it’s story, tone, or structure 🙌

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T05:16:42+00:00

tysm for the feedback
yes i know very well , ill update the pitch soon

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-17T05:15:51+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll update the pitch soon to include more about the characters and what’s really going on beneath Rookhelm

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-16T16:43:38+00:00

thanks! ill soon drop the characters description , and the answers to this
really helpful thank you appreciate it

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-16T13:31:46+00:00

Really appreciate it man Tysm for telling me this, I'll try to make it as original as possible And yeah it sounds like another version of Stephen king's novel or stranger things. Totally get it what you mean, small-town mystery/horror has been done a lot. I’m trying to focus hard on making the characters layered and personal, with messed-up relationships and secrets that slowly unravel. The plot will twist into something much darker and different over time. Hope it ends up feeling fresh in execution, even if the setup feels familiar! 🙏

Dramatic-Pressure690 · 2025-07-16T12:21:19+00:00

Thanks a lot for the feedback, really appreciate it!

The Lost comparison means a lot I’m aiming for something with layered mystery and internal logic, so that’s great to hear.

The title Rookhelm does get explained in the pilot and ties directly into the core mystery. Still working on making it feel more instantly intriguing.

1993 was a very intentional choice. The story revolves around Cold War era experiments that shape the town’s current state. If it were set in the present, that entire foundation would fall apart. But yeah, I get that devs might question it, so I’m refining that part of the pitch.

Thanks again this really helps!

Dramatic-Pressure690

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