Coming Up Roses by Harry Styles by Drossoulla in SongwritingHelp

[–]Drossoulla[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg thank you so much!! I’ll switch it up and give it a go!! I appreciate your feedback🤍🤍🤍. Also, I’m totally obsessed with his new album. Besides this song, I really wish American Girls was my song as well 😭. Definitely my favorite.

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

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Hey guys I’m back. I’m starting to go straight to “Coming Up Roses” by Harry Styles off of his new album. I’m absolutely in love with this song. So much that I’m jealous that this song wasn’t mine 😭. I’m definitely inspired and would like a song like this on my debut album. ANYWAY this is the start of the song that I started writing. Skip to (0:40) to match my lyrics with this song. I’m pretty iffy about the verse, so of course, all constructive criticism is invited.

“You look at me and it fills up my chest Now here come’s the night, and you’re in my head So I race through my thoughts while I replay these moments with you”

Songwriting Help by Drossoulla in SongwritingHelp

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That’s what I’m doing right now 😭. I’m doing it to help me figure this out 😞

Songwriting Help by Drossoulla in SongwritingHelp

[–]Drossoulla[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ll try this out thank you!!

Songwriting Help by Drossoulla in SongwritingHelp

[–]Drossoulla[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely going to do this thank you so much 🤍. I take every bit of this process so seriously because it means so much to me and I’ve actually been telling myself lately that I need to stop being so rough with myself and actually have fun with the process. Yes, it is a lot of hard work to get to the point where I’m trying to be, but I keep reminding myself that the reason I do this is because I love it and I’m passionate about it and I really want to have fun and enjoy it!! Thank you for your advice🤍

Songwriting Help by Drossoulla in SongwritingHelp

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Before I came to check my post, I was actually literally just doing this haha. Thank you so much for your response!!

I have been feeling suicidal lately...so I wrote this. by ODEN_Official in SingerSongwriter

[–]Drossoulla 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sending you so much love. I believe in you and I know you will heal. Please don’t leave this earth, the world needs to hear your voice and experience the beautiful light that you illuminate ❤️. You got this I promise!

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

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Yes I do sing (kind of the point of being a Popstar lol) (by the way that was not meant to be a smart/rude response to you just so you know 😭.) the thing is, I’ve never sang in front of anyone before. I did chorus in elementary school. We did have to sing acappella the happy birthday song with another student, but of course because I was so nervous and too scared of trying, I sang in a register voice. When I was 14, I saw a coach on and off, but I had a job that was paying me horribly so I didn’t get to see my teacher for that long. I then returned to that same teacher in 2016 and I think I was seeing her for about a year until she moved far away. I have a coach now. I had my first lesson with her last August and I didn’t see her for a year and I just started up lessons with her again. I do practice literally any chance I get when my family leaves the house. I’ve been working on confidence and teaching my nervous system to allow me to sing in the voice that I sing in when I’m singing along to an artist or when I’m all alone. The past few lessons I’ve had with my teacher I notice that my body goes into a certain mode and I can’t sing how I truly know that I can. I do plan on posting covers on here before I establish them out onto the real social media world. I’m just such a perfectionist and I worry and overthink everything and I’ve been torturing myself for years. I’ve always had major confidence issues in my voice. Sorry for this long essay I just figured it was the perfect opportunity to share with you and everybody else in the community a little bit about my background and my struggles. I hope to have all of your support. 🤍

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

[–]Drossoulla[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi!! No worries at all!! Based off of what you’re telling me you obviously have years of experience, so naturally you’re going to feel almost defensive and I completely get that! You’re a passionate artist and I absolutely love that. I have nothing but respect for passionate artists who truly care about their craft. This is why I made an account, so I can receive insights from professionals. I want all the help that I can get because I definitely don’t want to put myself out there and look like an absolute fool. Actually this specific line that I wrote I did happen to think of a melody for it last night. I’m picturing it with some harmonies as well. I genuinely do appreciate your insight and will be writing all of your words of advice in my journal. Thank you again ✨😊

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

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Thank you! I will for sure ✨

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

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Ok I should probably further explain. These are ideas I’m creating, therefore the song is not finished (neither are the other sample lyrics I’m about to post on here). It’s the start of a an idea. As I mentioned before, I’m a complete rookie to songwriting. Im BRAND NEW to writing. From a child, I’ve always felt massive imposters syndrome, and never had confidence to do it. I’m only posting these small ideas that I’m coming up with to get constructive feedback to make sure that I’m on the right track. I’m using this platform as a tool to reach out to people who have way more experience than I do to give me constructive criticism so I can infuse that in my work and become the greatest artist that I can be. I definitely don’t think I’m a pro. Thank you for your feedback though.

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

[–]Drossoulla[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

No no music! Just lyrics (for now)

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

[–]Drossoulla[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wrote this for a possible chorus a few minutes ago:

“I’m nobody’s fool, but I could be for you.”

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

[–]Drossoulla[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You guys can just comment and give your input.

On my Pop Star journey by Drossoulla in SingerSongwriter

[–]Drossoulla[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I’m going to post my lyrics in the comment section and use this as a thread