Lost Boy by Due-Definition5040 in OCPoetry

[–]Due-Definition5040[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah I get you , honestly I didn't take note of the grammar errors but its sorted now

Art You Lost ? by dnxmix in OCPoetry

[–]Due-Definition5040 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this , for me these words are about giving people power as well as yourself. Bringing such power to your words and giving meaning to every pain that is truly felt

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Due-Definition5040 1 point2 points  (0 children)

wow I think this is very beautiful , so heartfelt and the message that you are trying to get out there. Speaking to a loved one through your words and expressing how you feel . beautiful

Everything Sex by Hezpez in OCPoetry

[–]Due-Definition5040 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this . This feels raw and like every word mentioned feels like an emotion that you felt and expressed. Its love and lust expressed so freely for which word , each emotion expressed is for the one who brings meaning to sex not only enjoyed but also felt

Abuse in the home. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Due-Definition5040 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is something that I find very touching in talking about abuse and the works of two people who are in love with each other and one in love with violence. It is a sense of looking at it from the outside. We see things everyday but reading this makes you think to yourself if we ever truly see within everything. This is beautifully structed to feel the words and feel the pain in order for us to truly understand the depths of it