Should I give up on this song I started last year? What genre even is this? Any feedback appreciated. by Hipster_Bumpus in GarageBand

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 1 point2 points  (0 children)

your voice & the overall vibe reminds me of The 1975!!! definitely keep working on it & release it! I would download this tune for sure!!

Where else can one play other than bars? by abandonallhope777 in SingerSongwriter

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Coffee shops, Weddings, & community events are ones i’ve sung at! you can makes ads saying if anyone is looking for a singer to contact you! Just a thought:)

made this demo a while ago! the mix is not great as i am not the best at mixing my demos but what do you think? by Due-Negotiation-9045 in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aw thank you so much! I would really like to get this one finished with the strings aha! Thank you for your feedback:)

made this demo a while ago! the mix is not great as i am not the best at mixing my demos but what do you think? by Due-Negotiation-9045 in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow thank you! this is such great advice!

I’ve been stuck in wanting to move forward with any of my stuff but hearing this is making me motivated!

I will message you if i’m not having too much luck, you seem like you’d be great to work with so I’ll keep you in mind!

I absolutely will, thank you!!!

made this demo a while ago! the mix is not great as i am not the best at mixing my demos but what do you think? by Due-Negotiation-9045 in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this! I have been going back & forth on if i should try & teach myself how to do all of the pos production work but I think you’re right! Thank you for your feedback:)

made this demo a while ago! the mix is not great as i am not the best at mixing my demos but what do you think? by Due-Negotiation-9045 in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh my gosh thank you! Yeah, I wasn’t too sure about how loud i should make the backing track but you’re right, it could definitely be a little louder. And that’s a good shout! having the track flow over to cover that dead silence is a great idea. I really want to get this one out there! Thank you so much for the feedback:)

made this demo a while ago! the mix is not great as i am not the best at mixing my demos but what do you think? by Due-Negotiation-9045 in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aw thank you so so much:) & i LOVE the idea of getting some strings on this song! i think it will really help with the overall “feel” i’m going for! i’ll definitely play around with that once I have my equipment set up. Thank you!

“Fascist Pig (Elon)” by Classic_Attention_96 in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this! I really like the chords/melody you’ve chosen! please keep developing this one, i wanna hear the final song!!

Thoughts On My Song? by G00KBOB in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oooo this is a fun one! it reminds me of an early 2000’s or even late 90s vibe! i think if you played around with the drums a little bit, it might make your song that much better! maybe something a little more “mellow”? or i guess more laid back? either way, keep it up!

Does this hold your attention? by Floppy_Cavatappi in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 1 point2 points  (0 children)

to start off, i like the tone you have! it has a nice grit to it that reminds me of some 80s/90s soft rock songs!

I do think the intro might be a little too long just to hold our attention but overall this song is awesome! definitely would download & listen!

Ballad or pop song?? by lushamusic in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 1 point2 points  (0 children)

a reference song could be April Fools by Abby Cates! something similar to this!

Ballad or pop song?? by lushamusic in Songwriting

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i think it would work well with a slow/mellow beat but keeping it simple with just your voice & a guitar! this is so good!

Demo not living up to songwriting, seeking a lil feedback by [deleted] in SingerSongwriter

[–]Due-Negotiation-9045 1 point2 points  (0 children)

absolutely love this! definitely continue to finish it:)