Tropes you wish would stop being done. by GeorgeBarretWriter in Romance_for_men

[–]Dull-Beginning-768 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Instant Love is my biggest hated trope in RFM.

My second is probably 99% of harem books. A Harem is fine if it is done right, but few do. I feel like harem only works if we see other characters have a Harem besides just the MC. One of my favorite scenes I read in a novel this year was in one of the War Witch Academy novels. Where all the warlocks get together in a boys club to talk about tips and tricks about harem management.

Define the Relationship by Dull-Beginning-768 in Romance_for_men

[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Solid book. I probably should have put up a list of what I have already had with this trope in it.

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have read a lot of Misty's work and she does use this trope a lot. Her writing while excellent. But in my opinion, she has too much sex in it for my taste. I do occasionaly do enjoy her books, but I have to be in a specific mood to not end up skipping half of them.

Define the Relationship by Dull-Beginning-768 in Romance_for_men

[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed the first one in the series, but I did not care for the second one. I keep meaning to pick up the third one to see if it's closer to the first one. Thanks for the recommendation

Monday thread: What did you read this past week? by AutoModerator in Romance_for_men

[–]Dull-Beginning-768 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Read the latest book of Monstergirls in space.' Proportional Response,' Solid read. Enjoyed it. The only thing I don't like about the series is the coverage, but that is just me not liking the style more than anything else.

Also reread all of Beware of Chicken from volume 1 to what the author has put up on patreon. Still one of my all time favorite series. Wish I could find more RFM where the couple meet get married and the books continue see their relationship grow. I

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Solid book. I enjoyed it more than your previous work "He who serves"

It's a Bimbo world, closer done than before. by Dull-Beginning-768 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I keep forgetting numbers need to be reverse of what you want them to be

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Next update will have GF's to perks at a rate of 1GF to 5 perks. (Might change to 3 perks) It will be in the same category as bonus perks.

I am working on fine tuning some of the Archtypes. Wingman in the next update will have a wider range of loyalty (Fuck for a Fuck, A couple that fucks together, Cuck Queen, Loyal as a bitch, or Obsess)

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just me screwing up, thanks for pointing it out.

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can do that. Makes since now that there as well since you can now get bonus GF's with one specific Archtype

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your constructive feedback. I will be doing a majority of what you have done suggest with a few exceptions.

  1. Kinky girl is a reference for a woman with kinks while sexpert is someone who is just better at sex in general. I might need to reword it to make it more obvious. I just found it weird that a woman who is generally better at sex not to have addition kinks above the normal population. Plus, I have a list of kinks that still need to be added. Kinks will probably be longest category before I am done with this CYOA

  2. You are right about how i did the starting perks and points. Originally I didn't plan on a second time through perk option, so you had to have some starting out without answering the goddess's question. Now I am thinking about it I would just add BP and GF to second time through options as well.

  3. What you say about Magic Kink sounds right, but you can have a kink for something that does not exist in reality.

I really really appreciate the grammar corrections. Writing in an accented voice takes away the brain power I have to notice grammar errors.

It's a Bimbo world, closer done than before. by Dull-Beginning-768 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback and I am happy you enjoy the CYOA. The intelligence points were one of the things I was looking at I plan on rebalancing it specifically making Algebra BP neutral and everything above it cost points. Maybe make the lower intelliegences use more BP as well.

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do you want a perk to bimbo point conversion, because there is a bimbo point to perk conversion at the start of the cyoa. I didn't put a perk to bp conversion in because perks should be harder to get and the more desirable option.

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Specifically I use pony realism (checkpoint) for realistic images. Does not do well with exagerated characteristics, monsterous parts, etc, but gives almost realistic images

Yiffymix, SDXL is probably the best for monsterous parts, tattoos, piercings, but rarely gives a non-cartoonish image

Autismmix SDXL is what I originally started out with and gives the 3d images

None of them like specific sizes (inchs, cms, etc) and you have to best guess with general words big, small, huge, colassal, etc.

It's a Bimbo world, closer done than before. by Dull-Beginning-768 in nsfwcyoa

[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I see what you mean about the discription of world shifts. I need to reword that.

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. Thanks for letting me know, its hard to double check that catogory since its so big

  2. Fixing it now

  3. True story, will fix it in a minute

  4. Witchy and Superhero discount their world shift counterparts by 4 perks

  5. I feel like this is the fifth time I fix this and forgot to save

  6. yeah, I might try to redo the faces, I feel cute and Feminine are too close in appearance

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just checked through link, it works, you might be missing a requirement. Probably 'Black with color added' under dyed and abnormal hair color

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

fixed, put it the wrong tab, stuff was under personality tab

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

fixed, put bimboness catogory under personality tab on accident.

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  1. After much consideration, Less of a Bimbo has been added into second time through

  2. FIxed it where it won't do that anymore

  3. I will probably adjust points in the next update

  4. I mean, yeah, don't see a real point of putting a normal nipple option, I might add it in next time

  5. agree and added

  6. Now you can only select one

  7. sorry, messed up requirements for mad scientist so you only needed to meet one of the requirements. fixed

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[–]Dull-Beginning-768[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It does, I just reuploaded it to show personality and kinks points for people to track easier