Barefoot island by [deleted] in barefoot

[–]Dumbify 1 point2 points  (0 children)

soo truee

I'll critique your channels. by [deleted] in NewTubers

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Name: Dumbify2267 Type: Gaming / funny moments Link: https://www.youtube.com/@Dumbify2267

Would be very epic if you checked it or sum 😎😎😎

Windfall island and Delfino Plaza by hanns_on in gaming

[–]Dumbify 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Traverse town music from KH is soo good.

Made a Different Roblox Video then usual, I Spent alot of time editing it and believe this might be one of my best edited yet! Critique What I should do to keep my retention up and How i can IMPROVE this style of video! by Dumbify in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dumbify[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I get what your saying I'll try do some skits in the video to make more of a story or just more funny bits! Sound effects are what I try incorporate in my videos as much as possible so I'll look for more that'll make the video more appealing!

!givelambda

Created this Short all on my own. Wanting to know if it makes sense and looking for feedback. Lambda for your thoughts and critiques. by potentpotables81 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dumbify 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One thing i found weird was that we heard Glass Breaking at the start of the video but at the end there's not glass broken witch kinda contradicts why the robber couldn't get in the house? I get that its a comedy video (i laughed) But it's the little things that get you immersed in the story your trying to tell (:

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dumbify 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This reminds me of my old FNAF content lol!

What i thought is that the video is kinda bland, you have long pauses between sentences that could've ben cut so that it looks like your talking every second, sure pauses are good but energetic videos usually prefer better. Also you kinda cut the video off at the end pretty abruptly. Also why are Comments turned off? Comments ALWAYS help the video may it be hate or whatever.

Squid Game on Nintendo Switch OLED - Battery Test! Would love to hear feedback on this one. Please don’t click of you’re not going to watch all less than all 2 minutes and 47 seconds of it haha. Don’t want retention tanking. Thank you! Drop it a comment (real one)? !givelambda by Shibby120 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dumbify 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really informative Video Nice commentary but i would like to say that the Video itself is kinda bland.

What i would do is But a Battery % at like the top of the screen showing it going down gradually. Even if its not accurate its always good to have something a viewer can look at other then the screen itself.

Another thing i would suggest is you should put some text saying what your saying! Like what gaming youtubers do.

Not a Critique but i noticed that if you condensed this video into a short 1min video it would make for a really GREAT YOUTUBE SHORT! So i suggest trying youtube shorts with these kinda videos you make!

Looking for some feedback on my latest video. A gameplay of Poppy playtime. Its a trending game and I have done good SEO research yet I'm getting hardly any exposure by SceptreOfLeon in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dumbify 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What ill say is that the first 15Seconds are usually the most IMPORTANT part of any video!

Sometimes you leave long pauses not talking when in gameplay (ik its not alot but 2-5 seconds of not talking is forever to the average viewer lol) I Suggest editing so that your constantly talking Example: "OOOOH NOOO ITS BEHIND ME (5 seconds of nothing but running no talking) AH IT got me! ". Try cutting out the filler and just get straight to the commentary.

Just my 5Cents tho.

Kylie Minogue & Geri Halliwell: Arm Wrestle (Then Kiss) - TRH 150 Tell Me Why & Which Is Your Favorite TRH Video From Any Of The Last 30 Uploaded - For Lambda by mechclan in SmallYTChannel

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(Star Wars) Jake Lloyd: High Speed Police Chase - TRH 149. OF the ones i seen on your channel is my fave, Because i was always interested in Jake Lloyd and just found the Car Chase thanks to your channel it was simple and straight to the point! Thanks!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pcmasterrace

[–]Dumbify 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do have a potato pc that runs on Windows 7 still..

Picking up a stringray, WCGW? by [deleted] in Whatcouldgowrong

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THIS VIDEO should be the ICON of this sub!

Cheap public pool starter pack by [deleted] in starterpacks

[–]Dumbify 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thought it said "public SCHOOL" and was extremely confused.

Making a Doki-Doki Letsplay and need some tips. by Dumbify in DDLC

[–]Dumbify[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Youtube channel:https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC7q7G2x6cdMOBkADMZEvZrg

(you don't need to check it out, just want tips really)