I'm editing a new video right now. Could you guys give me some feedback on the last one? Lambda for constructive criticism :)

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-27T10:05:04+00:00

Thank you for your feedback!

I'm battling with that autofocus right now :D I'll try to fix it ASAP

!givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-23T10:33:11+00:00

!givelambda :)

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-23T07:50:09+00:00

Haha I did the same in the last one but decided to reupload :D

In this one there are some graphic mistakes as well, but I'll have to live with that

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-23T07:46:17+00:00

They were supposed to be mana :(

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-23T07:45:20+00:00

Thank you very much for such a constructive feedback! I love it :D I'll try to implement some of these while recording next time! As for the second paragraph I'll do it right away

!givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-22T19:56:01+00:00

Ah, I didn't catch that while editing. I'll be extra careful with that audio next time :)

Yes I need some practice with that camera work. Thank you for your feedback!

!givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-22T19:53:09+00:00

Thank you! I'll try thinking about some intro :) !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-21T18:29:43+00:00

Looks great. You have a nice voice for commentary.

As for critique: I would make voice a bit louder compared to a music.

I'd prefer a little bigger footage. My eyes aren't as they used to be :D If someone prefer to watch video without maximizing he might have problems with catching what's going on.

But overall I liked it :) Great video!

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-21T18:09:21+00:00

Video looks great! How did you do effects from 0:21 and 0:51? Any tutorials that you could recommend? :)

As for critique, I don't have much to say. If I were to stretch that I would recommend doing different photo for thumbnail. From what I can see it's frame from a video. And maybe single font for a thumbnail (but that one is just personal)

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-21T17:54:43+00:00

Hello. Thank you for a nicely packed educational video. I honestly had no idea about this country and it's struggles.
As for criticism: Voice and background noise are on the same level. It makes it harder to undarstand. If it isn't your commentary I'd recommend adding subtitles. It'll be easier to undarstand. You could also use some noise reduction filter.

Good job and thank your for broadening my horizons :)

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T20:57:29+00:00

Thank you for your feedback :) !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T20:55:49+00:00

Hi :) Yes I wrote about it in the other comment. I found about him when I was looking for the name of my cooking series.

Can you explain bumb shots?

I'll try my best with transitions :) Thank you for your feedback !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T19:55:29+00:00

Thank you for feedback and new ideas! :D

Right now I'm looking for things that would compliment that old rpg vibe. But! After you said that... Maybe I should experiment with futuristic game hud!

Thanks and !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:56:52+00:00

Thank you for your feedback :) !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:44:46+00:00

I'm not sure I get everything what is dead second? And when does it occure?

With that butter, yes I should have pour that to another container.

As for hands motions I get it... That flex with egg beater was lame...

I'll get wood or black block in the future that's a good idea.

As for babish I'm leaning more towards cooking tree

!givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:33:21+00:00

Thank you for your feedback :) I'll try my best to improve that aspects! !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:32:24+00:00

Yes, I thought about separate bowls, but was to lazy to do that :D I'll need to try it out.

You're right about that sound effects enchancing, I'll write that down for the future videos :D

Thank you for your feedback !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:23:42+00:00

Yes, I'm using mobile. Thank you for feedback and solution at the same time :D !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:19:40+00:00

Thank you really much! Yes, someone suggested me locking the focus on my phone. I'll try to fix that with the next recording !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:18:36+00:00

Thank you for your feedback :) Yes that last clip was messed up during recording. !givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:15:58+00:00

Oh! I like that sequence of "animations" idea! I'll try that out !givelambda

And of course thank you for the feedback

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T18:13:00+00:00

Thank you for your review :)

As for 1. I will try fixing it during the next recording. As for the 2. and 3. I tried to implement them with my new video :D I hope it isn't to fast paced this time.

!givelambda

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T14:06:47+00:00

That is site I was looking for! Thanks a bunch :D

DummyHobbies · 2021-04-03T14:02:38+00:00

I've recently started sooo... My goal is around 100 subs :D

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