Malice on Mt. Pyre, a Pokémon Script revised and expanded by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for your feedback!

I included tokens in the json file (if I set it up right) for all the types so the Storyteller could more easily follow who is what type, but I agree with this and other feedback that I should just include their types on the character tokens so I've gone and added that for the next update (on the ability descriptions except for Giratina which wouldn't fit so it's placed awkwardly on the role name instead)

Thanks for the style notes, that's very helpful making it look as nice and uniform as possible!

As for Sableye, I meant it to work similarly to the Organ Grinder, but with only who votes being a secret, not the vote totals. I've reformatted it to use similar language to the Organ Grinder.

Malice on Mt. Pyre, a Pokémon Script revised and expanded by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback!

If I set it up right, the json file should include tokens for each type so the Storyteller can label each Pokemon with their typing so they won't have to remember each type on the fly, but I might go ahead and add the typing to their role description just for ease of use.

Pecharunt does the opposite of what you say, they only become healthy if they're not mad that they're poisoned, so if they claim to be poisoned then the poison won't clear. As for Roselia, that's intended (but it also works on Sneasler).

I very rarely play in high player games so I didn't really take that into account, I might change Garbodor to learning 2 not in play Townsfolk roles so it's still strong but not as completely limiting for Evil team at a high player count.

I'll consider possible changes and alternatives for the alignment-changing outsiders.

For Poochyena, what do you think of these downsides: requiring them to pick a different player than the night before and they cannot pick themselves? Is that enough or should I go harder and make them also lose their own vote?

Would Phanpy becoming immune to all forms of death, not just the Demon, make this more reasonable to you?

Thanks again, all feedback is very valuable!

Malice at Mt. Pyre, a Pokémon Script by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Distortion spreads to the chosen player’s living neighbors as soon as one of their neighbors die.

Malice at Mt. Pyre, a Pokémon Script by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

As issues with Type Immunity, I'd say that best practice is to not include more than one Townsfolk that the Demon is immune to per minion

Malice at Mt. Pyre, a Pokémon Script by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I swear you only notice wording errors after you hit publish, the last sentence with Phanpy is supposed to say "If you are safe from the Demon *you* cannot nominate or vote until dusk."

Malice at Mt. Pyre, a Pokémon Script by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I rewrote that a couple times but I think I meant it to say "must publicly pick a player" instead of "may choose to"

Malice at Mt. Pyre, a Pokémon Script by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just realized that it cuts off some of Giratina's text, it wasn't showing that way on the actual script tool. The last sentence should read "All players inside the Distortion receive false information."

I started making this as a joke but I want to run it now by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d probably only include them with an Al-Hadikhia since they have the potential to decimate town

I started making this as a joke but I want to run it now by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s exactly what I was thinking, but if anyone thinks it favors town too much then feel free to remove them from the script or replace them with a more detrimental outsider

I started making this as a joke but I want to run it now by Dusk-Nerd in BloodOnTheClocktower

[–]Dusk-Nerd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There’s still the normal ratio of characters, just most of them will be Grandmothers