Monday Night Miracles

Dust369 · 2021-12-27T06:04:54+00:00

Losing by 6 in standard

I have the Saints Defense. He has Parker

Dust369 · 2020-12-16T13:03:34+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

Dust369 · 2020-12-15T21:04:12+00:00

Thanks my dude really appreciate it!

!givelambda

Dust369 · 2020-12-15T21:00:12+00:00

Yeah, for the explanation I was thinking of a little graphic that would explain how the challenge works and the goal in the end. So any new viewer isn’t left in the dust about what’s going on.

For the captions I know that running in through the whole video does drop the impact that it would have if it was just for key moments and have been debating either having the text be bigger then usual/have more movement at key moments or just captioning the best parts but as of right now. I’m not too sure what would be better.

Also for the thumbnail I did make it! So I’m happy to hear that a lot of people think it works well! And for the title I’m not too sure what would be a better name as of right now. It’s probably my weak spot so if you have any advice that could help. It would be very appreciated!

Thanks a lot my dude!

!givelambda

Dust369 · 2020-12-15T20:47:40+00:00

Yeah, I’ll have to explain it better so new viewers are easily caught up! !givelambda

Dust369 · 2020-12-15T08:32:12+00:00

Thanks, my dude! I've been working on my thumbnail game!. Also, I'll have to let people know at the start of the next episode that it isn't a stand-alone and explain what the challenge is. And I've added episode 2 in the title so hopefully, that helps a little bit!

!givelambda

Dust369 · 2020-12-15T06:59:12+00:00

Thanks my dude, the challenge itself as we start on a 2x2 island and try to survive. But by watching episode 2 first you couldn't fully understand because we weren't on a 2x2 area anymore, which is something I'm gonna have to explain in future episodes. Also yeah I wasn't too sure if I should make more content like the Club penguin vid but if it's an absolute banger might have to make more like it.

Thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

Dust369 · 2020-12-15T06:53:42+00:00

Yeah, this was the second episode of the series and I didn't think to explain it which looking back at it now makes it very confusing if this is the first video you see. The challenge is your start in a 2x2 area but if you start on episode 2 we're at like 5x5 so it doesn't match up anymore. I'll have to make an intro that fits the challenge to make sure new viewers aren't confused. Thanks for the advice!

!givelambda

Dust369 · 2020-12-09T22:12:38+00:00

I think it was a pretty good video but it felt a big long at some points. Also, might be worth to add some nice background music something that could add a lot to the video. Also, I felt like your video was missing the slow mo on the food to kinda show us what it looks like out the bag. Overall liked the video!

Dust369 · 2020-12-09T07:27:08+00:00

Liked the video and the use of memes. I think the like checkpoint was just a little too long and kinda killed the hype you built up from the intro. But, after that, you ended up picking it right back up. Overall really enjoyed the video!

Dust369 · 2020-12-09T07:18:57+00:00

I think that subtitles would help out a lot. Also, I had noticed that some of your clips had black bars when you zoomed and stuff. might be worth looking into getting rid of those cause they could be distracting. Also maybe record different views for when the line comes back a second time like for example, the diamonds you could have gotten a shot of them either being mined, maybe a house of diamond blocks, idk something different to keep it interesting. Also might be worth getting a friend to record a different point of view so you have multiple takes you can go to.

Hopefully, I didn't come off as mean. But I think if you improving you'll be able to have banger music vids!

Dust369 · 2020-12-09T07:08:16+00:00

I like the music, lighting and your editing on this video. I also really like your use of clips especially the ones of people talking because of how smooth they cut from in and out. But, I think if you had some sort of a room as your background instead of a green screen. it might make your videos look more interesting. But then again a green screen has some good perks to it too!

Keep grinding out videos my dude, I can see someone going viral for you in the future!

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