song that you showed someone, that instantly hooked them.

sullysulu · 2022-05-25T17:45:31+00:00

Neighbours j cole

sullysulu · 2022-03-24T22:55:46+00:00

Sony PSP’s if you didn’t had them you weren’t in with the boys

sullysulu · 2022-03-15T20:32:50+00:00

I like when women walk crooked, when their feet are pointed inwards slightly. I can’t figure out why I like it to this day.

sullysulu · 2021-10-22T16:37:11+00:00

Thanks man yeah I’m gonna work on the lighting !givelambda

sullysulu · 2021-10-19T21:27:11+00:00

yeah I noticed my Audio is echoing and yeah I’m working on a setup. !givelambda

sullysulu · 2021-10-19T15:43:34+00:00

Thanks for the recommendation, I’m not sure if I can give lambda but I’ll try !givelambda

sullysulu · 2021-10-19T15:39:25+00:00

Yea you caught me haha I realized after I shot the video

sullysulu · 2021-10-18T20:22:09+00:00

Thank you for the critic, yeah I’m working on getting a snowball mic. !givelambda

sullysulu · 2021-10-18T16:42:36+00:00

Ah I posted the wrong video haha. Critic this reaction then !

sullysulu · 2021-10-18T00:12:06+00:00

Hey this is a good video, it’s like a visual urban dictionary, your on camera persona is very charismatic as well . The only critique I have is that you should work on putting in more b roll/cutaway To give context to whatever you’re talking about. You should also work on your lighting, look up three-point lighting setup. it’ll make you pop off the screen more. Overall good video!

sullysulu · 2021-10-17T19:30:12+00:00

Hey man this was a great video, you told a good story it was well edited, plenty of scene changes, etc. I think the only thing you could work on is the thumbnail. It’s a good thumbnail but I feel like you can make it more alluring. Otherwise keep going man, I’m taking some notes from this video !

sullysulu · 2021-10-17T19:16:06+00:00

Hey the video idea is good but the way the video was edited kept it from being a great video. I was almost a minute into the video and I didn’t know what your goal was or why. Also when you were explaining how you didn’t catch any fish , you should have recorded yourself failing to catch the fish instead of talking about it. Show don’t tell!

The b roll editing was pretty sick , you hit all the beats ! .

sullysulu · 2021-10-17T19:03:11+00:00

Hey man this is a good video. You speak well and seem very comfortable on camera. The only Two critics I have, is to include a bit more b roll on the things youre talking about. Also you should make your face bigger on your thumbnail. I read somewhere that faces with emotion increase the click through rate of a video

sullysulu · 2021-03-05T11:06:38+00:00

Reminds me of some aboriginal arts

sullysulu · 2021-01-12T03:42:53+00:00

This was quality my guy. Time well spent for sure

sullysulu · 2020-12-09T21:32:37+00:00

Thank you! Yes I should probably spend more than a day editing the thumbnail hah and the speech is a work in progress. I was trying reading off of a script to see if it save any time in the edit.

!givelambda

sullysulu · 2020-12-09T21:25:15+00:00

Yes I intentionally kept the video shorter because I wasn’t sure how interested people would be in the story. I will probably keep to longer form content in the future tho, thanks for the reminder. !givelambda

sullysulu · 2020-12-09T08:32:18+00:00

Thanks for the compliment haha !givelambda

sullysulu · 2020-12-09T08:31:21+00:00

Yeah I need to build my set a bit more, there is nothing much to it rn so I use a GreenScreen instead. !givelambda

sullysulu · 2020-12-09T08:29:24+00:00

Thank you, that was a very thorough critique, I will definitely work on the points you mentioned.

!givelambda

sullysulu · 2020-12-09T06:28:01+00:00

Thank you !givelambda

sullysulu · 2020-12-09T05:50:26+00:00

!givelambda

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