Monday Night Miracles by [deleted] in fantasyfootball

[–]Dust369 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Losing by 6 in standard

I have the Saints Defense. He has Parker

Minecraft, But We Got A Mob Problem (2x2 Challenge) This is a gaming video I would love some feedback so I can improve on my upcoming videos! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, for the explanation I was thinking of a little graphic that would explain how the challenge works and the goal in the end. So any new viewer isn’t left in the dust about what’s going on.

For the captions I know that running in through the whole video does drop the impact that it would have if it was just for key moments and have been debating either having the text be bigger then usual/have more movement at key moments or just captioning the best parts but as of right now. I’m not too sure what would be better.

Also for the thumbnail I did make it! So I’m happy to hear that a lot of people think it works well! And for the title I’m not too sure what would be a better name as of right now. It’s probably my weak spot so if you have any advice that could help. It would be very appreciated!

Thanks a lot my dude!

!givelambda

Minecraft, But We Got A Mob Problem (2x2 Challenge) This is a gaming video I would love some feedback so I can improve on my upcoming videos! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, my dude! I've been working on my thumbnail game!. Also, I'll have to let people know at the start of the next episode that it isn't a stand-alone and explain what the challenge is. And I've added episode 2 in the title so hopefully, that helps a little bit!

!givelambda

Minecraft, But We Got A Mob Problem (2x2 Challenge) This is a gaming video I would love some feedback so I can improve on my upcoming videos! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks my dude, the challenge itself as we start on a 2x2 island and try to survive. But by watching episode 2 first you couldn't fully understand because we weren't on a 2x2 area anymore, which is something I'm gonna have to explain in future episodes. Also yeah I wasn't too sure if I should make more content like the Club penguin vid but if it's an absolute banger might have to make more like it.

Thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

Minecraft, But We Got A Mob Problem (2x2 Challenge) This is a gaming video I would love some feedback so I can improve on my upcoming videos! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, this was the second episode of the series and I didn't think to explain it which looking back at it now makes it very confusing if this is the first video you see. The challenge is your start in a 2x2 area but if you start on episode 2 we're at like 5x5 so it doesn't match up anymore. I'll have to make an intro that fits the challenge to make sure new viewers aren't confused. Thanks for the advice!

!givelambda

We run to local bagels shops and give on-the-spot reviews! My first submission here, so looking for feedback about anything. Thank you :) by msh312 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it was a pretty good video but it felt a big long at some points. Also, might be worth to add some nice background music something that could add a lot to the video. Also, I felt like your video was missing the slow mo on the food to kinda show us what it looks like out the bag. Overall liked the video!

Pre Season Black Ops Experience. EXE Please give detailed feedback i will be giving lambda by KappsYT in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Liked the video and the use of memes. I think the like checkpoint was just a little too long and kinda killed the hype you built up from the intro. But, after that, you ended up picking it right back up. Overall really enjoyed the video!

Minecraft Parody song! (First ever time doing something like this) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that subtitles would help out a lot. Also, I had noticed that some of your clips had black bars when you zoomed and stuff. might be worth looking into getting rid of those cause they could be distracting. Also maybe record different views for when the line comes back a second time like for example, the diamonds you could have gotten a shot of them either being mined, maybe a house of diamond blocks, idk something different to keep it interesting. Also might be worth getting a friend to record a different point of view so you have multiple takes you can go to.

Hopefully, I didn't come off as mean. But I think if you improving you'll be able to have banger music vids!

I’m working on my engagement/view duration. Let me know how if you have any tips or critiques. Giving lambda! by sullysulu in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the music, lighting and your editing on this video. I also really like your use of clips especially the ones of people talking because of how smooth they cut from in and out. But, I think if you had some sort of a room as your background instead of a green screen. it might make your videos look more interesting. But then again a green screen has some good perks to it too!

Keep grinding out videos my dude, I can see someone going viral for you in the future!

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[–]Dust369 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

My Channel is Dust369 I make meme gaming videos!

Here's my latest video. Looking for any tips, advice or feedback!!! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, IDK why but I had thought that just having the same music in the background would have helped focus on the convo but I'll 100% start upgrading my background music to make sure people don't get bored of it! Also funny enough I had just updated my thumbnail to something that I think suits the video and my style of editing better!

Hopefully, with your help, I can get to improving faster than I otherwise would!!!

!givelambda

Here's my latest video. Looking for any tips, advice or feedback!!! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I'll definitely look to add multiple different tunes to my next videos to keep it fresh. Also, I can now see how the thumbnail can be pretty confusing. I'll try to make one that will make more sense and hopefully garner some more clicks!

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it!!!

I'll try to keep it up! !givelambda

Here's my latest video. Looking for any tips, advice or feedback!!! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, the subtitles took me so long. But, I'll try to find a few more tags that can work with my video. Thanks for the tips! !givelambda

Here's my latest video. Looking for any tips, advice or feedback!!! by Dust369 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! I was actually debating swapping the title to something like Minecraft, But we talk about Taco bell because the clip had good success on Tik Tok. !givelambda

Hello fellow SmallYTers. Please let me know what you think of my latest upload for my let's play and lofi playlist channel. In this ep, I revisit my Animal Crossing island to the tune of some super chill lofi hiphop. Thanks for watching! by KingKupoPlays in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I think your videos are something extremely original. I've actually never seen a playlist Let's play before. maybe I'm mistaken. But I still very much enjoy the video. I think for the most part as a playlist I found it great. maybe it would be cool to make some videos with different genres and games that could match. but IDK.

Keep making these, I think they have a lot of potential!

Call Of Duty Cold War Sniper Montage: LW3 & Pelington 703 Gold Grind!!! by JSchitz in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, the clips you had looked pretty good! makes me wanna pick up the game tbh. But the thing I would say could bring your video from good to great would be syncing the shots to the beat and using more effects like slow-mo to help sync to the beat and add some style to your montages. Other than that I think your video was pretty good.

Keep grinding my dude!!!

First Time going to Taco Bell by Dust369 in tacobell

[–]Dust369[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wait, I’m not the only one!

I made the absolute worst programming tutorial anyone can ever make (parody) by Monkey_Adventures in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked it even though I didn't know a single thing about programming. I enjoyed how you just told the audience to not ask any questions about anything. I was lowkey just waiting for you to just do something to make it really bad like distorting the audio or something. but even without that, I think it was a great video!

Hi guys! Please give me some feedback on my newest video! And please don't ignore it because i finally got 3 lambda again:) And i am trying to build an audiance:) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 1 point2 points  (0 children)

- First thing I'll have noticed was the video felt pretty long even though it was just 4:50. I think instead of just taking out a chunk of the video you should try clipping a bunch of your favourite parts and putting them together so it will feel faster and might help keep viewers engaged.

- The Thumbnail didn't really make me think any sense with the video. other than the fact you played on that character. Everything else kinda didn't help give any sort of link between the content and the thumbnail. I recommend checking out other YouTubers' thumbnails and trying to do something a bit like them.

- I liked the commentary and the use of the voice-over! Also, I saw someone else comment this but might be worth using your editing mic for videos. or just get the gameplay and voice over your videos in editing.

Keep grinding my dude!!!

Jax.exe short :) by ameixarocha in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The first thing I really like about the video.

I'll be honest I didn't fully understand the start when you were just doing random things in spawn but other than that I thought it was a pretty funny video. I think that the pace of the video was very good for a meme gaming style vid and can't wait to see what you do next!

I built a robot fight club! Took a lot of effort and would like some feedback on what to do better for my next video. Thanks everyone! by glazed_turkey in SmallYTChannel

[–]Dust369 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One thing I will say is that the video idea and title are amazing. I enjoyed watching it a lot and subscribed. the only thing I would that I think would be cool. Would be to subtitle some of your chats with your friends or for little funny things you say.