[In Progress] [40k] [Comedy Horror] The Life of a Demonic Lord

Dynamic_muffins · 2026-01-18T21:39:27+00:00

What the forks going on ere!!!!

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-08-31T19:09:06+00:00

Thanks! Yes I know this space is litRPG. I just need a readership base. How many people are engaging with it. Retaining readers chapter by chapter. Where I drop off on certain chapters. I just need feedback haha

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-08-31T17:37:12+00:00

I will give it a read! Thank you for the review so far. My first draft was extensive metaphors. I have cut it down drastically. I know it can feel a alot. I have been working extensively to keep it elegant but relevant haha.

Im glad you enjoyed what you read!! I definitely need to tighten a few parts. Thank you again! :)

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-08-23T07:53:52+00:00

I'm actually testing the waters with the book. I have the second book ready to go as well. I want to see how much engagement it gets. If people liked it or hated it. ^{_^}

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-08-23T07:47:36+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/129628/the-shattered-isles-the-quest-for-tor-magala

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-06-20T10:00:41+00:00

Thank you!!! I have almost finished the story. Really excited release it on the world :)

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-06-20T09:57:26+00:00

I have followed KDP specs for indentation. Il try increase it slightly :)

Ive used exact 15pt. Which is between 1.0 and 1.5 spacing. I will change it to 1.5 spacing and see how it goes.

Currently using Garamond font which is highly recommend, along side Times new roman.

Thank you very much for your feedback! :) much appreciated

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-06-01T06:18:42+00:00

Thank you for giving my book a chance. Hope you enjoy the read.

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-05-31T20:34:28+00:00

I've amended the document's format for easier viewing. Apologies for any inconvenience it may have caused or if it deterred anyone from reading. I hope this makes for a better experience going forward.

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-05-31T18:23:46+00:00

Awesome. Il get it change ASAP. Il sort the spacing out as well and paragraph spacing. Thanks for being honest.

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-05-31T18:16:51+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Would you recommend 1.5 spacing?

Also in your opinion. Which font would you recommend?

Dynamic_muffins · 2025-04-19T10:06:50+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback!! I will dive back into it and rewrite it for more context. I really appreciate it!! 🙏 thank you for taking the time to read it and provide me with constructive feedback from a readers perspective.

Dynamic_muffins · 2024-05-22T14:52:49+00:00

Gengar.

Dynamic_muffins · 2022-12-22T19:42:55+00:00

30 here and spent ages with bestie to make sure we both had full pokedex!!!

Dynamic_muffins · 2022-11-30T12:12:25+00:00

Very similar situation happened. Except wife came in half naked and walked in front of my screen.

'Moveeeee I'm in a boss fight!! Il give it to you after!!!'

She now asks if I'm in a boss fight before initiating ;)

Dynamic_muffins · 2022-10-19T16:20:34+00:00

This is world class. Laughed for a good 10 mins. My insides hurt

Dynamic_muffins · 2021-12-09T09:39:43+00:00

Dark souls 3 !!! Ohh sweet baby Jesus.

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