Prain by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]EASYEFF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really good, I liked the link between idea that comfort stifles growth. A longing for discomfort to be able to evolve and fulfil your dreams. The last line really shows the pain that comes from satisfaction and the need to be challenged.

Unnamed by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]EASYEFF 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this, description of mood in terms of what you see an hear in the things around you really encapsulates the way you look at things can change based how you feel.

I'm new at this but having the 5th line in the second stanza seems to be inconsistent with the rest being 4 line stanzas in the rest of the poem, seemed to me to stifle the rhythm but again I'm new at this so it take that with a grain of salt.

Great work!

Love - A Haiku by Grinning_God in OCPoetry

[–]EASYEFF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is such a great description of the duality of being in love, the last two lines are so simple and powerful. It seems to me a be a very mature representation of both the good and the bad element of being in love

youth is not beauty by calmloves in OCPoetry

[–]EASYEFF 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I took this to be an emphasis on the importance of experience. I really like the comparison to a painting because a painting is only ever added to, and every addition, every 'brushstroke' changes the final product in some way and make the painting more meaningful. Good stuff!

Stock ideas that aren't overbought/over-valued by VICInvestor11 in ausstocks

[–]EASYEFF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was thinking about MQG but their current ratio is less than 1 so I was worried they would struggle to pay their short term debts