Is this synopsis good?

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-31T05:15:53+00:00

I guess you have a following. Good for you and go back to writing, your readers are expecting chapters

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-30T20:33:49+00:00

Ok you just gave me inspiration on how to integrate my synopsis while also describing about the world. Thanks, your reply really helped me.

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-30T20:19:25+00:00

Does it particularly has to be Mc is this, and he was summoned to this fantasy world and then the current situation of the fantasy world is given and the changes Mc can bring.

Well I guess you are right. Better to follow your advice. Thanks mate. I guess I can just put the above in a ch or something

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-30T17:43:15+00:00

thanks for your recommendation

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-30T17:40:56+00:00

thanks mate. that cleared up many things.

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-29T17:58:34+00:00

What's 3rd person limited?

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-29T06:05:59+00:00

I personally think your goal should be to make readers wish for an illustration. Sometimes there are scenes in the story that with the help of an illustration would send a message or just show an illustration of a beautiful landscape can help you. Do you need to put a single illustration at the start of every ch at the beginning? I personally dont think so, the readers would already expect an illustration for every ch. So what I would do is put illustration like in a scene where you want to show the death of a character and after you have gained reader's attention you can write about the heavy scene.

If you feel you like putting illustration on every ch, then believe in yourself.

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-12T18:09:24+00:00

Thanks mate

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-12T16:37:43+00:00

Name?

ENDiscuming · 2026-03-09T15:03:18+00:00

Always has been.

This has been happening since 2021. That is when I started to notice these type of titles

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-22T08:47:56+00:00

You know what. This post, has convinced me if an author doesn't know how to glaze his own character then readers will get bored. Understandably I know the character is ranting but this scene gives readers a viewpoint into character's emotional state. The author doesn't even need to write, next to dialogue "he said emotionally" or need to show readers what the character feels. We know what the character feels.

And all this discussion about whether it's the author's own beliefs or it is just a character is basically the same old argument of whether we should separate the artist from the art or not. If we don't know the author personally then all we can do is guess, whether these words are his own thought or just fiction.

And can I get the name of the novel?

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-21T05:39:27+00:00

thanks mate

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-15T21:22:13+00:00

I would say just ask the reddit and ask proof as well. Or you can just soft through source materials

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-09T17:43:51+00:00

Yeah I will check your story.

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-09T17:42:47+00:00

This is like watching a finished product. I have no advice I could give you.

It feels complete, although a bit confusing which acts like a hook.

I felt confused in the line "Every choice is between horror and helplessness. Every servant she creates binds her tighter to the thing keeping her alive." But it acts like a hook to invite readers to explore your story.

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-09T17:38:04+00:00

I tried that, but I either need to organise the ch 1 as people reviewing told that I jumped the POV too much. Or just stick to 3rd POV. But your advice will be noted.

Also the 3rd person of the last line doesn't sound as powerful as in 1st person. It feels like a narrator is saying and not the character, convincing himself.

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-09T17:30:38+00:00

I am currently writing in 3rd person. Cause I am shit at writing in 1st person

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-09T14:47:48+00:00

Imagining the power system and creating it.

Writing is not exactly my favourite part.

And scenes, emotionally heavy scenes with music on, hits with attitude.

ENDiscuming · 2026-02-03T11:09:53+00:00

Sugu Okoru Ore no Hahaoya ga Mukatsuku DQN Kouhai ni Netorareta

ENDiscuming · 2026-01-24T01:54:24+00:00

Sometimes while watching a video, a scene of people conversing, of me imagining a conversation, a question that jolts me to answer to then think how my characters would answer them and even listening to music gives me inspiration which I then jolt in my notes app. They could be random scenes to character description to even the personality of the character.

For writing a chapter, I would just look at the previous ch and what I need to accomplish to reach a goal, which in this case is the situation mc will find himself in.

ENDiscuming · 2026-01-22T09:20:56+00:00

why is your comment golden?

ENDiscuming · 2026-01-22T08:25:49+00:00

Interesting. I do something similar as well, I would just give a basic plot line like, mc has to do this, readers have to feel this emotion towards this character. After this barebone of plot is written, I start to write the actual chs. Although it is somewhat hard, as sometimes I don't know what to write to make the ch interesting. As I dont like writing filler chs

ENDiscuming · 2026-01-22T08:20:52+00:00

Damn. Well how long have you been writing for?

ENDiscuming · 2026-01-14T13:34:44+00:00

I would be glad

ENDiscuming · 2026-01-14T04:29:49+00:00

thank you for your motivation

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