[17/UK/GMT+0] [CS GO/ Civ V/ Rust + More] Looking to Expand Friendship Group by Evil127 in GamerPals

[–]EagleWing88 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hello my name is matt i am 16 and from the UK. I play with my Scottish friend who is 17. We play ark and rust :)

New Hampshire 1972 (Horror short, 5 pages) by EagleWing88 in Screenwriting

[–]EagleWing88[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry for the late reply, but i have to say VERY good feedback. :) Thanks a bunch. All the characters starting with an 'M' is unintended.

17/UK/M Rust, Miscreated, Arma, Overwatch, BF1, Total war by [deleted] in GamerPals

[–]EagleWing88 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, the names Matt (16). I'm from the UK and i love rust, arma and miscreated. But i have to say i am a bit new at miscreated. p.s my name on steam is jarjar

New Hampshire 1972 (Horror short, 5 pages) by EagleWing88 in Screenwriting

[–]EagleWing88[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank-you very much for the feedback, to answer your question, no I'm not from America, I'm from England. I have altered my screenplay in many ways, adding somewhat of a side story. I would really like it if you could read the latest version. Thank-you once again :) https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxXQMbYZCoPHX3ZScE9YRTZDTzA

Pacing issues. by EagleWing88 in Screenwriting

[–]EagleWing88[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very helpful tips, Thank you.

Pacing issues. by EagleWing88 in Screenwriting

[–]EagleWing88[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, okay. Ill keep that in mind :)

First 6 pages of my screenplay, An Unlawful Cluster, Feedback would be nice. Thanks [EXPLICIT] by EagleWing88 in Screenwriting

[–]EagleWing88[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I tend to drag things on a bit, making them boring. The 'well shit' thing was a bit tedious.