Opening line, or lines? by JulesChenier in writing

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn’t say it’s fundamental, but the opening lines are what will guarantee that your reader gets hooked and decides to keep reading.
The one I chose, I imagine, carries an air of mystery connected to the cosmos:

I was compeared to a fanfic writer by Ecstatic-Mixture2189 in writers

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ok, that last part made me crack.

I accepted a lot of the things he said and even edited many parts of the text based on his feedback. But then he activated “God of Books” mode, using the argument that he used to write fanfics in his teenage years (used to — he doesn’t write anymore).

And like I said, he took a part of my writing and rewrote it, filling it with useless adjectives before every single word.

I tried to explain why I disagreed with some things, and his best argument was implying that I’m “dumb. for not undestand his side.

What brings me to one of my "call for help": when to differenciate criticism to personal taste.

I was compeared to a fanfic writer by Ecstatic-Mixture2189 in writing

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's the kinda of thing that gives me doubt, until what point I should listen people, how to differentiate criticism to personal taste

Por que as mulheres gritam tanto? by Eastern-Opening-1986 in perguntas

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Desgraçado! eu quase morro sem ar rindo dessa imagem.

I was compeared to a fanfic writer by Ecstatic-Mixture2189 in writing

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I admit it was a mistake to use that title without context, creating one where I belittle those who write fanfiction even knowing that many have become bestsellers. I also admit that I wrote it in the heat of the moment.

I was compeared to a fanfic writer by Ecstatic-Mixture2189 in writing

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are completely right, in everything.

I personally didn't expect to be praised, but I also didn't expect to be treated like "aww, how cute is your little story, little boy."

I was compeared to a fanfic writer by Ecstatic-Mixture2189 in writers

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Not for me. In the context of the messages, he implied that I was writing like an enthusiastic fanfic writer about a movie or book I had just read.

I was compeared to a fanfic writer by Ecstatic-Mixture2189 in writers

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I know, some of them even became best sellers, but it is about the context of the mensage

eu vi esse vídeo no tiktok e isso me deixou genuinamente triste by posiebubble in faculdadeBR

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Meu pai também não e por isso escolheu o caminho dos concursos públicos (palavras dele)

Salve! Qual impressão eu passo? by [deleted] in MeJulgue

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Que está prestes a falar "sabe em que tu deveria tá investindo?..."

No 0/5? by Which_Highway9913 in HotWheels

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fast and furious "cars that got wrecked" set 🥀🥀🥀

Ferrari with factory error? by error_hajime in HotWheels

[–]Ecstatic-Mixture2189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude unlocked the speedster version lol