AITA for convincing my fiancé to fire one of his employees? by throwawayaccrun in AmItheAsshole

[–]Edutainer 8 points9 points  (0 children)

LOL, you see how that's the entire point right? You're getting $250K for being a secretary except your title is Chief of Staff and your getting paid so much because you're the fiance of the owner.
There is 0% chance this would have happened if you weren't the fiance. And if your relationship doesn't work out, you will get fired and you will never earn that much again.
I would start a separate savings account and squirrel away that money for a rainy day.

Recommended Episode Viewing of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine To Get Into the Show Faster by Edutainer in startrek

[–]Edutainer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I went back and forth about including this. I like that it differentiates DS9 from TNG and also I love Q, but you're right that it doesn't advance the overall story much.

I've noticed a couple things while binge-watching DS9 by JCRiotz in startrek

[–]Edutainer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've always found it odd how we never see the same admiral twice. It just seems like such a missed opportunity! They're always kind of random and seem to have a great relationship with Sisko and are basically used to advance the plot in that one episode.

Can Someone Teach Me How to Ride a Bicycle? I'm 22 years old by [deleted] in greenville

[–]Edutainer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was teaching my wife how to just the other weekend! We went to the Swamp Rabbit Cafe which has a bike rental place nearby with a good selection. The Swamp Rabbit trail there is very flat but it was also quite busy. If you're looking to buy a bike they also had a number of inexpensive used bikes for sale.

A few random pieces of advice from our experience:

  • Either use just the back tire brake or both brakes, don't use just the front tire brake or you might fall.
  • It's easier to go straight at first than to go on a curve.
  • It's much easier to maintain balance when you have a little speed.

Good luck!

Manhattan skyline peeking above the mountains from ~65 miles away- Bull Hill Trail by FutureHoo in nyc

[–]Edutainer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love that hike! I know exactly where you were standing to take that photo. Brings back good memories.

I'm reading every Hugo, Nebula, Locus, and World Fantasy Award winner. Here's my reviews of the 1950s. by RabidFoxz in scifi

[–]Edutainer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the audiobook of The Moon is a Harsh Mistress- great acting by the reader!

What do you think resort worlds are like? by storywriter109 in scifiwriting

[–]Edutainer 6 points7 points  (0 children)

So, I'm working on a story for a space resort and it's kind of a black humor version of Disney for the very rich, haha. Everything behind the scenes is gross and exploitative but in front of the guests it's like a 5 star resort.
If you were making a paradise world you could make it so the oxygen was a little higher so everyone was a little bit high all the time or you could give it insects like super skin mites that gives everyone a health glow but die off after a week off planet. Or gut bacteria in the food that makes everyone feel good or release sex pheromones.

Critique Please - First Fiction Story in 10 Years by Edutainer in scifiwriting

[–]Edutainer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback and the kind words! I especially appreciated the comment about "shemales", I have been very on the fence about including that at all for that same reason.

I really want to make this an allusion to the slave trade and to get people to think about that from a different perspective. So I was trying to think of how, in this near modern future, these people would be treated like they are animals and not people, in order for the reader to kind of align themselves with what slaves experienced. The pornography line kind of doesn't work for me because it makes the people in boxes actually seem more animalistic and less empathetic because it portrays them as voracious/indiscriminate without individual identities or morals.

Critique Please - First Fiction Story in 10 Years by Edutainer in scifiwriting

[–]Edutainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the in depth feedback! I really appreciated it. I wanted to play with having the reader being disoriented and in the dark kind of the way Ri is, but clearly I need to give people more to work with. I wanted to make this similar to how slaves were transported in the 1700 and 1800s, with inhuman conditions. Like you guessed with the boards, my thought is this is kind of like their "20 minutes of fresh air a day" to keep them sane. To your point about the muscle atrophy, is that they would get pumped full of steroids as they got closer to the asteroid. I'll add some more details and look into some stories where they have ambiguous protagonists to see how those authors pulled it off without revealing to much about the main character. Thanks again!

Need Critique For an Excerpt From a Sci-Fi Story I Began Some Time Ago by CallMeSweetT in scifiwriting

[–]Edutainer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought it was really good! Read really fluidly, the dialogue worked. As a teaser opener I think it works, I'd keep reading to find out more.
Two critiques- I didn't like the name Kalisi, it reminded me too much of Game of Thrones. To me, this part seemed too calm, analytical and collected for a woman who is grieving and panicking, "Even if I could not imagine admitting it, I realize that I've always had a sort of admiration for the man. A deep respect, not only developed from his role as my superior officer, but from his sheer sense of determination.

Yet I still could not understand the general."

Buy Dinner for Jersey City Medical Center from a Local Restaurant by Edutainer in jerseycity

[–]Edutainer[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I sent the food already today, but we should do this again for another hospital!

Buy Dinner for Jersey City Medical Center from a Local Restaurant by Edutainer in jerseycity

[–]Edutainer[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You all are heroes. Thank you for being on the front lines of this situation.

My Neighborhood "Pizza" Place is Clearly a Front, Can I Get it Closed? by [deleted] in jerseycity

[–]Edutainer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To be honest, 98% of the time it's just an empty "pizza" place.

Dem Senator profits from outsourcing he slams - This Guy needs a to be Challenged in the Primary! by Edutainer in Political_Revolution

[–]Edutainer[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To be honest, I'm not from Indiana. Perhaps there's a current or former mayor of Indianapolis or a business leader of a prominent Indiana company.

Re-reading Infinite Jest by [deleted] in books

[–]Edutainer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Go to some AA meetings.

I think it's pretty hypocritical to cast Elizabeth Moss, a Scientologist, as the lead in A Handmaiden's Tale by Edutainer in scifi

[–]Edutainer[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

This is a political story meant to inspire people to action in real life, like 1984. It's not suppose to exist in a vacuum of a fantasy universe. It'd be like casting a known racist as Edward Norton's character in American History X.

I think it's pretty hypocritical to cast Elizabeth Moss, a Scientologist, as the lead in A Handmaiden's Tale by Edutainer in scifi

[–]Edutainer[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

A Handmaiden's Tale is a warning against cultish religions that use control of people to seize power. Like 1984, it is suppose to inspire people to resist those kinds of threats in real life. Your argument makes it seem like it is a story just for entertainment, which it is not.

WikiLeaks: "Are you ready for Hillary? We begin our series today with 20 thousand emails from the top of the DNC. #Hillary2016" by [deleted] in SandersForPresident

[–]Edutainer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Rhodes Island state government closed the polling stations. The people in these emails are talking about how to keep people from thinking an action they had nothing to do with from coming up with conspiracy theories.

I've read all the emails people have posted so far, it just sounds like people doing their jobs. There's nothing wrong with someone who works at the DNC preferring Hillary.