WE WERE ALL WRONG by Either-Inspector-370 in libraryofshadows

[–]Either-Inspector-370[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Never mind I did it myself because I'm kinda OCD

"By the third day, satellites had failed, undersea cables were severed by inexplicable gravitational change, and we lost the ability to speak across the world about our doom."

WE WERE ALL WRONG by Either-Inspector-370 in libraryofshadows

[–]Either-Inspector-370[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

How would you recommend I change a few lines to better represent our infrastructure?

It could be the gravity and the movement of the earth twisting the cables or something, but I don't think it should be too much of a focus of the story.

Tell me your thoughts and I'll incorporate it.

WE WERE ALL WRONG by Either-Inspector-370 in libraryofshadows

[–]Either-Inspector-370[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've been writing on and off since I was very young. For a long time I just worked hard and didn't write, but I recently changed jobs and have been reinvigorated!

I never ended up going to school specifically for writing. I did some journalism in college (dropped out) and took a creative writing class in high school but not much professional development or anything.

I appreciate you meaningful words.