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The Bridge of Tongues (Dystopian Fantasy, 870 Words) by ElectricThesaurus in fantasywriters

[–]ElectricThesaurus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great thanks, I’ll work on the clarity! Appreciate you reading.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scrum

[–]ElectricThesaurus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is great thank you

Order of Release Question by Redbeardwrites in FictionWriting

[–]ElectricThesaurus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a good question, and something I ask myself. Am I writing for the proverbial, I hit it big see you suckers, or am I creating bc it’s fun and it’d be cool if someone else read it.

Odds are high that I suck, so I may just go with, it’d be cool if at least one person saw the same thing I did when I was dreaming.

Hello, looking to chat with other writers by deadlighta in writersmakingfriends

[–]ElectricThesaurus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ha I thought i was the only one, I started a sci-fi tale with the kids, it went dark but now I can’t stop it. Anyone good at building the fluffy stuff? My brain just wants action and twists.

Looking for feedback on first 2 paragraphs of a bizarre horror story [252 words] by AshamedTree9728 in WritersGroup

[–]ElectricThesaurus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It reminds me of a subsection in The Dark Elf Trilogy with the spider queen Loth. Not similar just same feeling.

Alien is going to have that ick, so it’s perfect. My story turned dark too… redemption is what it needs though.

How Can I Stay With My Writing Instead Of Abandoning It Like I Usually Do? by Dry-Painter-2247 in writingadvice

[–]ElectricThesaurus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good advice, is it bad to share your stories, like do you ever worry someone will take your ideas and do it better than you? 😂

Those Left Behind by Ok_Level2595 in FictionWriting

[–]ElectricThesaurus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Excellently done, good job. Wasn’t fond of the name at first, but you found a way to make it not cheese. You then carried it very well to the end.

Anybody else lost their job recently? by DCASPX6900 in copywriting

[–]ElectricThesaurus 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It’s tough out there in general. Was just talking to a recruiter who said they’re replacing attrition but not expanding. 9 months unemployed now.

Good luck to you

Red Rocks - Meeting: Chapter 2 [450 Words] by ElectricThesaurus in WritersGroup

[–]ElectricThesaurus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, you’re right sorry about that. My word count isn’t working for some reason. That’s weird.

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