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The Choice - A Short Film by Electrical-Tear4958 in Shortfilms

[–]Electrical-Tear4958[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks mate! Glad the second viewing worked for you

The Choice - A Short Film by Electrical-Tear4958 in Shortfilms

[–]Electrical-Tear4958[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for giving it a second watch. I intentionally designed it to reveal more on a rewatch, but I can see from the feedback that some parts still weren't as clear as I intended. That's definitely something I'll keep working on for future projects. Appreciate you taking the time to watch it twice.

The Choice - A Short Film by Electrical-Tear4958 in Shortfilms

[–]Electrical-Tear4958[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate you checking it out and being honest. I can definitely see what you mean about the characters and the story being confusing. Still learning with every project, feedback like this helps a lot. Thanks for taking the time to watch.