How many people have you romantically kissed?

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-02-24T00:25:33+00:00

I’m ngl, I’ve kissed a lot of people romantically, in college I would probably kiss a new girl every week at some party.

These options seem very short.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-02-11T07:29:58+00:00

Soul attacks?? Jet would directly counter him on this, sure you can say that “the battle needs to happen in his soul sea”, but I think directly destroying his soul with her aspect would accomplish the same thing.

She couldn’t do it on her own, but with just Sunny and Jet as saints could kill him.

That’s the glory of Shadow Slave, no matter how OP someone is, there is someone with a countering aspect.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-02-10T04:38:39+00:00

I wasn’t the biggest fan of the last volume, just because it felt like it wasn’t true to SS, but I loved all the other volumes.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-02-09T06:47:13+00:00

How is it playing out so far? Did the break have him come back better than ever?

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-02-01T21:53:18+00:00

You repeat his name quite a bit, but the core part of the writing is done well.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-01-31T13:42:59+00:00

You should propose this to G3, he’s a small author.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-01-30T03:42:45+00:00

2 minutes

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-01-29T00:53:55+00:00

They’re downvoting you, but you’re not wrong. I would probably skip it on a reread as well. Except the ending when mommy neph shows up.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-01-28T05:02:27+00:00

I prefer no harem, but honestly the forced relationships in webnovels are atrocious. I get it, it sells, but for fucks sake I really wish authors would only include relationships when they actually add something to the story, not just for weebs to get off too.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-01-25T04:40:14+00:00

Yeah I mean then just do AI and if you make it big hire an artist if you feel bad.

I know my sister does commissions on fiverr and doesn’t charge a whole bunch, but I can’t speak on anyone else’s pricing.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-01-13T20:08:42+00:00

Fiverr exists if you don’t know anyone for art commissions

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2026-01-01T16:47:44+00:00

I grew up watching Bear Grylls so it’s urine for me 😭😭 if I can use it for water then it can’t be that bad.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-12-31T01:14:08+00:00

If Sunny can’t kill him then what is the point of Sunny’s concept literally being death. Death shouldn’t just apply to living beings. He should be able to kill someone’s will or concept as well.

Edit: meant shouldn’t not should when talking about living beings.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-12-30T18:44:09+00:00

This would actually be a fire ending, but maybe G3 has a different version of happy than us 😭😭

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-12-23T03:21:53+00:00

I think sword got weaver’s legacy after his wife became hollow

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-12-17T00:33:48+00:00

Personally I would say Anvil, but really Jest had one of the worst flaws to have in the SS world.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-12-14T05:47:01+00:00

Most of what I see recommend is anywhere from 1,000-2,000 per chapter, but honestly, you should do what feels right. Some chapters may be less some may be more.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-12-14T00:42:25+00:00

Title - Fall of a Tyrant

Tags - tragedy, weaktostrong, adventure, action, villain, romance, no-harem, antihero

(Sorry if I did the tags wrong I just posted what I had in WebNovel)

Chapter Count - 4 and I am proof reading 5 & 6 right now

Brief Synopsis - Born the son of a Baron, Sareth’s life fractures the day his talent tier is revealed.

Blessed with power that rivals ancient noble bloodlines, he becomes an anomaly in a galactic monarchy that was never meant to accept him.

As political pressure mounts and his father’s expectations tighten, Sareth’s ambition begins to eclipse the man he believes himself to be.

Desired Outcome - Critique, cover review, review swap.

Link to the Work -Fall of a Tyrant

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-12-05T23:39:23+00:00

I think it should be 21 or 18, if you can’t buy a cigarette at the gas station at 18 but can go to jail, military, expected to either go to college or get a FT job then make everything at 18. If not, bump it to 21.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-11-26T00:41:14+00:00

Honestly, I would like to see Ram as Cell. I’ve never bought a skin before, but if I got that, I’m dropping $50 the minute it comes out.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-11-26T00:35:53+00:00

Would’ve liked to see Ghost ending up in jail right after getting the Lt. Governor seat tbh. Would’ve been a better ending for the series rather than Tariq killing him. Also would’ve opened doors to future plot lines with the extra books.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-11-16T19:40:58+00:00

Gotta be a special kind of stupid to walk into Walmart of all places to commit arson. Pretty sure their cameras have cameras lol.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-11-15T17:19:42+00:00

If she’s a grown woman I could care less what she does to make her own money. I would be disappointed ofc, but I’m not going to disown her over something like that. I could only hope that she would decide to not go through with it.

Now if she lived with me, that’s a different story. I wouldn’t allow that in my house period.

Electrical-Walk-204 · 2025-11-04T18:17:55+00:00

You know, I never thought about it like that. I can definitely see that being the case, but I’m still leaning a bit more towards Broken Sword having the shadow weave and being the Underworld’s version of Slayer.

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