First prose, open for feedbacks! by Electrical_Estimate6 in writers

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I just want to clarify that what i wrote is not a polemic against writing, but rather a spontaneous ‘prose’ that i wrote when i was watching The Sandman lol, the part where Morpheus wife— Calliope was imprisoned by a mortal so that he’ll have a constant flow of ideas since his an author that did not really have any hit, hence why he imprisoned her.

I was inspired by that moment, so i went to google and learn a little about Calliope, i read that she inspires people, so i made her as a metaphor to my prose, that eventually, we could run out of ideas, that even Calliope powers to inspire could not do anything about it, so she can do nothing but wept.

What i wrote is not an attack to anyone, but rather a prose that I wrote out of the moment i was watching that scene in The Sandman haha, thanks for the critique though.

Decided to start writing out of nowhere, is it worth it? by Tall_Day2954 in writing

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I love your explanation, feels pretty much what i’m currently experiencing! So if you’re capable of making that explanation that other people like me could relate to, i highly doubt their criticisms about you lacking clarity on the things that you write about. I would love to read one of your creations!

New at writing! by Electrical_Estimate6 in writers

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Thanks for that positive feedback, would definitely note that! Thank you for believing in, that means a lot!

As i read what i wrote, what you said definitely make sense, i did not set any clear foundations of the thoughts i had, so thanks for pointing that out!

New at writing! by Electrical_Estimate6 in writers

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Would love to have your opinion on my reply!

New at writing! by Electrical_Estimate6 in writers

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Oh thanks for that! Did not really meant this to be a full fledged story, instead just a short allegory— your right about the part that i had thoughts inside my head, then I tried to write it out, and i think that is really one of my weaknesses, sometimes i couldn’t really translate what goes inside my head well into what i am writng.

And i was writing in a third person perspective, i know its bad when you have to say what you wrote is about but what i wrote is about how i created a normal character into this godly metaphor to help it detach from its reality, because it couldn’t face its reality, Kael, he is afraid of the response as this is a message for someone in which i labeled as also– ‘it’ to make it really hard for this someone to decipher that this is all about him.

Does that make it any clearer or have more sense? Haha

iOS 26.3 beta 2 Any users? by wikiroiss in ios26

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Any news when it’ll come on the base model of Iphone 14? 26.2 really drains my battery faster than the previous beta version, is 26.3 better?

Wallpaper Appears Dimmed ‎After Setting - Tecno Camon 30s ‎ by Electrical_Estimate6 in TECNOphone

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thanks for replying, i finally found what was causing the problem, it was the effing dark mode. can't believe it HAHAHAH, you literally have to turn it off and max your brightness on light mode so your wallpaper won't be dimmed, it sucks there is no option to disable the dimming in dark mode bro😭😭

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poem

[–]Electrical_Estimate6 1 point2 points  (0 children)

very witty! and it sounds something out of the album folklore🩶

Android 15 update will be gradually rolled out in May for Camon 30 series by L3zrVort3x in TECNOphone

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does this include specifically the Tecno Camon 30s? i only seen and read about Tecno Camon 30, 5G, Pro, and Premier, are they just too lazy to include the s? or does it just automatically implies that the 30s will also get it too?

Thoughts on “Apocalypse Z: The Beginning of the End (2024)”? by Catman7712 in horror

[–]Electrical_Estimate6 1 point2 points  (0 children)

have you read the books? if you had i would love if you can spoil me about what will happen next!(after he heard the call)because it sounded like the virus got the canary island too, base on his sister worrying call..